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Misty Twilight |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MISTY TWILIGHT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Tell me when you’ve felt it, the mist on your face, wet and moist it touches, almost every place… Your eyes, most alluring, smile charming, as it shows, soft lips are your forte, like the mist, they don’t oppose… I’ve been there, and I know, but want to know your touch, with passion do I need, for I never will have enough… Take my hand, hold unto mine, I’ll guide you into this night, first I’ll take you ever slowly, into the misty twilight… ~~~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
romantic as ever...helen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I can almost smell that jasmine and heather dew just reading and envisioning this misty lovely vision! (big hugggssssss) May your loving heart always hold true love close and dance through the mist into eternity! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is first class  Kathleen-- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Bill...how romantic can it get? Not much more than this my friend, Good write....hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Take my hand, hold unto mine, I’ll guide you into this night, first I’ll take you ever slowly, into the misty twilight… A gentle offer of passion and romance that no lady would be able to pass up...Misty Twilight.....how those words sing to the heart.....I love this poem.....it feels strong and good and about a man who knows what he wants. BRAVO!! **big hugs**  Very well done, Bill. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, An invitation unlikely to be refused. Great write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy as I've said before you are a master of Romance, this is so soft and gentle I love it. Truly fabulous writing, without a doubt something really special Outstanding as always, As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A dreamy love song that fills the heart with its adoration. JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Misty twilight, Bill this is lovely, floria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love dark romance...and misty twilight..very lovely bill ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some day BC, you will have it all, including the misty twilight...*s M "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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