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Destiny To Nowhere (Corrected )
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Destiny To Nowhere (Corrected ) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Destiny To Nowhere I went to the place “Nowhere “ was the name I had patiently waited Yet you never came Gone from memory “Nowhere” had no view I was shedding tears Here thinking of you Had read his words “Nowhere” feeling dead Was this a cruel joke Words a poet said He was somewhere “Nowhere” he became From light into dark A poet changed name Found a maiden fair “Nowhere “ finds bliss A Siren from the sea They dance and kiss He is everywhere “Nowhere” is only text I flew into oblivion I wonder what next Gathering his ladyX “Nowhere” silently fled I began losing hope In being left for dead Here I shall remain “Nowhere”my destiny Siren melted the ice He had forgotten me Hope©2002 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a sad write...and beautiful as well... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
yes.. sad and well crafted.. I am really enjoying reading you. Pepper |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hi thanks Sunshine for the reply , yes this was me and my emotions Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hi thanks Peppermint , you saying that you are enjoying reading me , now that is a compliment !! most of my recent poetry is not on my webpages as yet Hope |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Hope, this is so heartbreaking, I pray that this is not a recent feeling, for your destiny is never nowhere, you just don't deserve that kind of love that can't trust in you. (sigh) Always believe in your heart, sweet friend, for your love will always find a way and bring you to eternal happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Sweet Hope... this is so sad. But little did you know that icy i only am and that i was in the shadows watching you. Beautiful work . alan |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
I think that I understand your sadness, it took me awhile..but now I do! I don't believe in love anymore...it's just a concept that usually ends up hurting someone. mutington/joyce |
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