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Come Dance Darling
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Come Dance Darling |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Come Dance Darling Come dance with me darling get up on the floor Match my movements darling let your spirit soar Hold me closer darling cradle me to your hips Wrap me in music darling brush me with your lips Come dance with me darling sway now with me You shall find darling the music flows through me Come dance with me darling get up on the floor Feel me moving darling don’t you want some more Sway with me darling can’t you feel this beat Let’s do the rumba darling give in to this heat Come dance with me darling waltz me into night You shall find darling we can ripple with delight Come dance with me darling get up on the floor Hold me in your arms darling twirl me evermore Come tangle with me darling entwine me into you Lets tango together darling lets try a step or two Come dance with me darling dance me until I drop You shall find darling you’ll never want to stop Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is very song like...the repetition of darling brought to mind, "Grace Darling"--a legend that I admittedly would not have heard of if an old friend had not taken that as a stage name here in New Orleans. But I know that YOU know the legend.  Thanks for the read and the dance Marsha! (Oh...and if you like the sax? Check out her website!) She plays a mean saxophone! |
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his poet II Junior Member
since 2001-12-20
Posts 18 |
Hi Marsha, Great rhythm in your words. I can hear the music in the background. Nice piece. Cheryl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is lovely, Marsha, really. One question if I may, why is the text so small  My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-03-2002 03:47 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* great minds think alike but I like yours much better.....sigh such a dance of love.......wouldn't it be wonderful to be held in the arms of the man you love. MAGNIFICENT, Marsha...I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely, romantic and it has a great beat! I'd give it a 10 Marsha! LOL....just kidding...I love it! I LOVE IT! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mushy - May I have this dance? BC |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Great flow throughout the piece! I loved it. Hey I don't know how to dance too well but I'll try. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Uh, ah, may I have the next dance? Either a tango or a waltz will do nicely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Marsha darling, this makes me want to find a cute stud and head out on the dance floor! Who could resist a dance with you? well done girlie!  RP |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully written, Marsha....and with just the right amount of heat added. You wrote it so well, that I can almost hear the music starting.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are soooooooooo romantic, sweet Marsha, your beautiful words and lips sing with such beautiful love that always make us feel like dancing! (kiss on cheek) May you forever dance with the love of your life! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I could hear the music playing Marsha, so romantic, floria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity darling girl thank you, yes naturally I know the story of Grace Darling. My sisters always used to tease me, if it wasn't chanting Beverley's into devilry which used to drive me crazy. (Mainly because I refused to even answer to Beverley), it is my fourth name but I don't use it. They would compare me unfavourably with Grace Darling. Then there was my younger blonde and thicker sister who used to chant... say your Grace before eating your Marsha mellows.... I didn't say it was an amusing story, no one who knows Fran has ever confused her with being particularly bright. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did too   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cheryl I'm glad you like it darling girl. Thank you muchly I hoped the music came through Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kathleen darling girl, because I can't make it any bigger smile Truly a long time ago someone complained about the text being small and I resolved that as soon as I found out how to make it bigger I would. I'm glad you like it darling girl, I enjoyed writing it. Although it did need some editing and my friend Bill assisted there. (Well, actually he did a lot, thanks Bill) Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-06-2002 11:20 AM).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
OOOH yes, Marsha... I liked the rhythm of this whole piece.. Sometimes we find skills we didn't know we posssessed when inspiration strikes... hmmmmm!! Definitely a keeper... and you've given me some great ideas!!! Hugs, Pepper |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha you could dance awaymoonlight with the music in your write. And the font... you can make it bigger by clicking on the box next to the font type and justification. If you do it before the poem it will set the size for the whole thing. Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen darling girl your writing is much better. As for this one I enjoyed writning it I love a good dance. And we ALL know it takes TWO to Tango Thank you muchly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Nancy darling girl you are always so sweet to me, thank you muchly. So you like to dance too? Mmmmm there's nothing as good for the soul as a good dance with a terrific partner Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy if you're asking I'm dancing. smile Seriously though darling boy thank you for the help with this one you know better than anyone how it got the rhythm, since you put it there. And whats a dance without the right music, it's a bit like trying to Waltz to a Rumba, or Tango to Cha-cha, it doesn't move right. Thank you muchly Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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