»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #18
»
Early Morning Thoughts.........
| Open Poetry #18 |
|
Early Morning Thoughts......... |
|
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
|
 Early morning rise hot steaming brew Tries desperately to warm out These thoughts of you Hazy remembrance Of last night’s dream Soft and sweet Like sugar and cream Sipping slowly Savoring each drop Hoping to make These thoughts of you stop Guess I’ll need more Of this strong Java brew To wake away These thoughts of you ~SEA~ |
||
| © Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
With sweet thoughts like this Susan, I'd be tempted to put away the coffee and just savour the memories a little longer. Beautifully written ... I enjoyed the whole concept you captured in this piece, just lovely!  Best wishes and Happy New Year to you! /Kit |
||
|
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel, every night I dream of my love, I think of her hours after I get up, and just want to go back to bed and dream of her throughout the day! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooooo lovely! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, A lovely write, throughly enjoyed. *L* |
||
|
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Reminds me of the line in a Stones song...'just can't seem to drink ya off my mind'. Though, don't think they were talking about coffee! |
||
|
Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so beautiful, Susan, there is a peace about it and I think many of us cherish that early morning time, I know that I do. When I arise, I relish the quiet and the moment just before the sun comes up? Oh, God, you can't match it. Enjoyed this. I am/Kathleen/ |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Sue! Happy New Year and what a lovely write! Enjoyed this and know what you mean. Don't you just hate it when you are having a really good dream, and you start to wake up at the best part....so you try to go back to sleep really quick and get back into it where you left off? Oh...sorry...I started to ramble, which I do when I get excited....great write! Hugs sweetie! *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* not me......if I am having such sweet dreams I just want to stay in them as long as I can. What a wonderful poem. I love it. Hope the Java works. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Try some green tea...yummy...James |
||
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is lovely, Sea. Joyce |
||
|
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, your writing as of late has been wonderfully fantastic! your writing has always struck a chord with me and hit close to home, but lately girl you have been outdoing yourself and this piece here is a perfect example of what I'm talking about! Take care hon! Best wishes for the new year. Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
||
|
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, this is most genteel in the flow...very nicely done...very gentle smile |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok...ok...you can quit showing off now...excellent use of words...wonderful imagery, and you post a pic that suits the mood wonderfully... have I told you lately how PROUD I am of you? |
||
|
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I absolutely love it and relate. Great love poem. |
||
|
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Susan, would it help if I joined you for a coffee? Loved this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - the artwork flows right into this writing. And you do write from the heart... BC |
||
|
amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Beautifully done, SEA~. I can't do what you can...if I tried it would come out horrible. Something like hypodermically hooking myself up to the pot!! See, I told you! Horrible. It's a wrong thing! Seriously, though, really great write. Your work is always a pleasure to read. |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
||
|
OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
dug it Sea.....that residue of thought... well done lady |
||
|
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
got an extra cup?-- lovely as usual SEA-- ...and where do you find all these beautiful paintings? There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
||
|
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Sue... Would it help if he were decaffienated?  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Aw shux, gal, just go on back to sleep and forget the coffee Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Susan - Forget the sugar and cream, you need a little whiskey in that coffee to help you forget.  Nice write.Dave |
||
|
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now you just know what I am going to say right? LOL - sure hope you didn't get his name tattooed on you? Oh I just couldn't resist it! It is that little  inside of me! This was lovely in its complete presentation Susan. |
||
|
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, Such sweet memories of you. Wonderful. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
