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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-02-10 07:06 PM



Kiss me awake
for surely I dream
oh to fall in love
with winter in spring

green beneath white
sweet lace upon sprout
visions of "we"
dancing softly about

your beautiful face
solemn serene
beneath fairy dusting
of winter in green...

~Tier
1998

© Copyright 2002 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 2002-02-10 07:17 PM


Lovely, T!

Cor

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-02-10 07:27 PM


Thank you, Corrine, *smiles*

~Tier

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3 posted 2002-02-10 07:35 PM


Tier~This is exquisite!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2002-02-10 07:37 PM


Thank you, Nancy!

*Hugs*

~Tier

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-02-10 08:47 PM


Hello Tier

Such wonderful images you portrayed through your magical words....simply beautiful!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2002-02-10 09:00 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is so so sweet and gorgeous, sweet friend, I always love the dazzling sights of willows and flowers kissed by flurries of snow! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may these visions of love forever fill you with joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
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7 posted 2002-02-10 09:10 PM


Awesome write!!!
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8 posted 2002-02-10 09:22 PM


Beautiful Tier...very nice...
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9 posted 2002-02-10 09:53 PM


This was beautiful!

sky

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10 posted 2002-02-11 10:41 AM


I like the word play here Tier. . . it's fun. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

strbbux
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11 posted 2002-02-11 12:15 PM


YES yes, I love this tiers, the play on words, short, sweet, love this much. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Tiersdin
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12 posted 2002-02-11 12:22 PM


Thank you, Sue, your kind words are greatly appreciated!

Dear Noah, You never fail to make a poet feel any less than
well loved! Thank you!

Amusemi, Thank you so much!

Thank you, Magus, I'm glad that you liked the poem. *smiles*

Thank you Sky, I appreciate your reading and commenting.

Sven, thank you. This actually happened in my air a couple of years ago. It was indeed beautiful to behold.

Aww... thank you, Floria you're such a sweetie!

*smiles*

~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (02-11-2002 12:23 PM).]

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13 posted 2002-10-02 11:26 PM


Soft, subtle
and sweetened
with color.

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