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My Perfect Life
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My Perfect Life |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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My Perfect Life in my perfect life I’ve found some imperfections placed them all together call them my collections each has it’s own place but as I look in my inspections some cross over to others my imperfection intersections I inspect them all at each and every section they are just wild hairs go in all directions I know them all by heart they are my connections the worst of them are attached to my affections getting better at being alone no one to give objections seeing who I truly am within my reflections "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, yes!!! And may you always cherish the connections of your heart, for as long as you love yourself and believe in your heart, you will find true happiness and love in life! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful reflections to ring in the New Year 1slicklady! I very much enjoyed your use of rhyme in this piece, very nicely done indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Helen - you do write with perfection, and you are an artist... I know these thoughts below, and have found them to be true... getting better at being alone no one to give objections seeing who I truly am within my reflections BC |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It's hard work becoming a better human being and part of it is accepting that we cannot be perfect, how ironic! Great poem. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
They say that even the most perfect diamond has a flaw...I think you're a gem. This poem is flawless. Very thought provoking work. |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
I see you are still creating beauty. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
We are none of us perfect but you sure are doing a wonderful job of working on it. This poem is honest and beautiful. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I have reflected over much of what you write here and you are absolutely right. Even with its imperfections, I truly love my life. Like Bill, I too particularly relate to those last four lines. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
WE ALL do this...sometimes too much...I have done this many times...What always helps me is someone who thinks I am very special... Their words..they keep me from doing all of those inspections... This was beautifully written and very honest. That goes a long way.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Helen, you ARE special believe me. 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you used the rhyme in this piece, Helen. It was a rather ingenius piece of perfection.   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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