Open Poetry #18 |
The Sum Of Me |
Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
When I work, I earn. When I play, I laugh. When I write, I think. When I talk, I speak. When I’m alone I cry. When I’m with you I love. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
if I go by this... the sum of me is seemingly more complicated just kiddin..you have a neat way of getting to the nitty gritty here Happy New Year by the way, enjoy the love part and thanks again for that tip you gave me on my posting at Moontown. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-05-2002 09:24 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo cute, sweet Margaret, may you forever find true happiness with him and love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margaret, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Now that sums you up just perfectly to my way of thinking....I really like this poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for the warm words of encouragement. Sometimes they simply come out simple. Glad you all liked it. (ecrivan, I'm pleased my humble suggestions on Moontown were able to help you out. I too love a good constructive critique!) Happy New Year to you all! Hope it's a good one! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the simplicity of this. Very beautiful. Welcome to Passions. All writing comes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mac darling boy this is simply wonderful I love this I truly do, You fit in so well here. Utterly first class writing I can't tell you why this works so well all i can say is it does. I wish I could do one half so well. As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for the welcome, I appreciate it. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Hey Mac, decide to come over here like some of us MT'rs did. I used to post under Dledge95 over there. Anyway, I liked the poem, and it is good to see you here. Dave |
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