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Jasmine Flame
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Jasmine Flame |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Jasmine Flame By: Noah Eaton 1/2/01 Your body rises like a cygnet Twirling in your passionate pas seul Singing through my soul in pirouette en dedans Spreading your silk wings as the honeysuckle moon unfolds Against the courtship flute, we’ll dance in entrechat Leap in arabesque to worlds of love never found As will the foulard wind strums her soft concertina Conducting lovers rondeaus with timeless refrains heaven-bound Dawn will wear Her lingerie Revealing stars of endless dreams and secrets That we will forever cherish with pride Practicing ballet of the heart with joy and persistence Meet me tonight beside this sensual Jasmine Flame Burning against jealous skies of jade Hold me close to your heart tonight And show me what the magic of love can create… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-02-2002 11:08 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Meet me tonight beside this sensual Jasmine Flame Burning against jealous skies of jade Hold me close to your heart tonight And show me what the magic of love can create…"" Noah~ OH WOW!!! what a sensual, beautiful piece.... woven with just your touch....  love this!Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely written Noah... jwesley |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This is soo romantic Noah. There are many complicated words in there, but it just adds to the greatness. Greatly written as always buddy! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah You are certainly a master of your craft and this was a beautiful symphony of love you have created. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dawn will wear Her lingerie Revealing stars of endless dreams and secrets That we will forever cherish with pride Practicing ballet of the heart with joy and persistence. What a pretty picture you orchestrate. Loved the scent of jasmine, the warmth from the fire, oh heck I loved the entire ballet Noah. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Lookie what I stumbled upon on the 12th page! This delightfully sensual poem. I like it very much, and you use of vocabulary has me blown away! Must go back to page 1, hehehe love, RP [This message has been edited by RosePetal (01-06-2002 12:16 AM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
noah this is downright outstanding.. wow. let me just say that again...WOW!! Now you go on and perfect that "ballet", as you call it! tehehe Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"the magic of love" such a wonderful poem and again what was this doing down below. time to bring it up again..love this Noah. great and sweet and soft. floria |
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