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Rapunzel (Marsha's Challenge)
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Rapunzel (Marsha's Challenge) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Rapunzel By: Noah Eaton 1/5/01 Come out, come out, stare from your balcony Up high in the glass tower, I have come to set you free You've long been an odalisque, locked in your cauldron The only moccasins you've worn are your chains in your prison You've been tangled in a twisted skein of lies You've longed to take a sip of this authentic wine Come out, come out, your fancy is what I curry Frisk down your hair and I will hold you lovingly Come out my dear There's no need to fear I am your prince charming I'll give you everything Rapunzel... I have seen the phoenix rise in the distance The fires of passion incinerate in instance That you summon in every passionate scream Every night when you lather yourself in the moonbeams You wear the stars as a necklace Through your jewel eyes I watch the moon orbit You wear velvet so well, you strum lyrics from your satin mane Come, my love, I'll take you to Eden and we'll thirst of loves champagne Come out my dear There's no need to fear I am your prince charming I'll give you everything Rapunzel... Hold me tonight I'll lay right by your side I'll make love to you till the morning light To your heart's delight Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust When the heavens freeze up and suddenly change I will love you always, with all my heart's lust My sweet queen... My sweet queen... My sweet queen... My Rapunzel... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-05-2002 03:25 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, Romantic write...someone's in love! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
I wonder what Rapunzel would do if she heard you?  Certainly she'd help u climb her tower... Lovely Noah.....and as romantic as always Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Your heart is so romantic and gentle. *sighs* This is just beautiful. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Jewel eyes, champaign oh my, this is wonderful, great poem Noah. floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I always liked the story of Rapunzel. This is great. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Noah dear..dont you just love all those fairy tales...cinderella and snow white..and little red riding hood ha...  ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy, I really love this It is utterly perfect. Nornmally you write wonderfully this is even better Absolutely fabulous darling boy, this goes into my library. Thank you Challenge well met and matched As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Noah! I think this may very well be one of your very best! It is a song AND a story, a poem and a delight! Thank you! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was a keeper Noah, I really enjoyed it and into the library it goes! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Noah, this is so beautiful!!! One of your best yet! It sounds like a song. GREAT work!!! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Noah! This is soooo beautiful!! I love it!! I agree, it has to be one, if not the best of yours! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
The eye of love is so in your writing. You have an unbeleivable talent to share. Each of your words is penned with gentleness of heart. Thank you. You deserve so much praise for what you have done. And not just for the poetry you have posted. But also for the oh so caring replies you give to the works of others. You are a tremendous spokesman for love. Roger |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice, Noah, very nice! Kathleen-- |
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