Open Poetry #18 |
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I want to be |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
To exist in a moment of bliss where passion brings fantasies turn reality captivated within I want to be To kiss your lips and taste you deep and dream of your love like this I want to be To provoke an explosive sensual fusion of two bodies you and me forever loving I want to be To live in you and you in me in paradise where love exploits itself with a single glance of seduction recklessly I want to be |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
Two words pretty much sums it up: OH MYYY!!! LOL (Sorry I had to just put that in - it's kinda my trade mark now) Beautifully written! ![]() "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Me too, me too!!! ![]() Wonderfully seductive!!!! Pepper |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Yes! Very senuous write. Enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Walker - Very sensual. I could feel all of what you were trying to relate. Enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Mmmmmmmmmm...seductive, I love it!!! (sigh) May you be all you want to be forever and may true love fill your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always so romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually amazing....this is what I want too...you have put it in words that have passion flowing in them and sensuality gracefully filling each word. BRAVO!!! I love it. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have pretty much put all of your romantic poetic cards on the table...Something tells me you will have a royal flush... |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Walker, How romantic this is ![]() ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
walker, Don't we all? ![]() Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I used to think I wanted this but somedays, I'm just not sure..... but it is a beautiful write Kathleen-- |
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