. . . heaven in my arms . . . Senryu

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-01-05 10:36 AM

we shall have that waltz
eternity our dance floor
heaven in my arms

Inspired by:In Thought Alone

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-05-2002 10:40 AM).]

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

1 posted 2002-01-05 10:38 AM

That's the best way to love eternally, great one here.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-05 10:55 AM

*sigh* there you go again......touching the heart with so few words...*sigh* the idea of being in someones arms was one I woke up to this morning....pretending in my way that there was someone here to hold me. Well done. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2002-01-05 11:00 AM

enjoy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-01-05 11:22 AM

Every Texan already believes he lives in heaven...or at least, that's what I've been told. We all so enjoy when you pick on a poem and become inspired...

READ MORE!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-05 11:25 AM

(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, it's so wonderful how such few words reveal so much beauty, and how you paint such beautiful words that have us all dancing of the ground and embracing the magic of true love! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-01-05 11:27 AM

how do you do that??? make me smile and sigh at the same time

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-05 11:30 AM

you are so fantastically talented at these, Interloper!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

8 posted 2002-01-05 01:20 PM

ANOTHER SUPERB SENRYU!!!!!!!! ****Ivy Rose

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

9 posted 2002-01-05 01:38 PM

Interloper,

Very nice senryu

I liked it.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-01-05 02:13 PM

Interloper you do these so well, and I love the idea of eternity being the dance floor. Cant wait to see it. floria

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2002-01-05 03:13 PM

Stunning...in so few words. *Soft sigh* for the memory of things lost...and things found.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

12 posted 2002-01-07 03:05 PM

Swooningly short.

Admiring you at Passions.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-01-07 03:50 PM

........Passionately Perfect......

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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