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Skyfire
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0 posted 2002-02-14 01:00 AM

You're so far away
  and yet so near;
I can't physically touch you
  but I feel you here.
You've broken the walls
  that encompass my heart;
You've captured my trust
  become my sweetheart.
You say that you love me
  this I believe;
You ask me to stay
  Darling, I'll never leave.
We're too young to think
  that far ahead;
If we do ever marry
  by love we'll be led.
I love you my Dearest
  words cannot say;
As I sit here and write this
  I try to keep my tears at bay.
I miss you so much
  I long to be held;
I can't believe I did it
  but I did - I fell.
So far you've been perfect
  even your faults I do love;
I can't help but wonder...
  Are we each others true love?
© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-14 01:03 AM

*sigh* this poem is so heartfelt and beautifully penned..Your feelings flow like a gentle river over small pebbles...Delightful....Keep wondering and have a HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
amusemi
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2 posted 2002-02-14 01:24 AM

Absolutely mahhhhvelous my dear!!



Glad to see you're not Boycotting!!!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-02-14 01:26 AM

oh...this is just about one of the most honest displays of the spirit of love...

very, very, sweet sky...

touched my heart, you did.
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4 posted 2002-02-14 05:07 AM

Rhonda this is an absoloutely wonderful poem and it touched my heart so very deeply, I Love you so very, very muchly

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Dee
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5 posted 2002-02-14 06:54 PM

Skyfire, what a beautiful message to the one you love.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand
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6 posted 2002-02-14 09:23 PM

Such a lovely love poem. Sounds like you have a great guy there.   

Michael

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