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Broken Arrow |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I've not a simple verse to express this pain that makes my heart ache it feels like a broken arrow piercing through me. I've no metaphor to play upon no rhythm to rhyme no lover to call my own. How does one describe the breaking apart, pulled back bending in the curve holding tight, aiming too high missing the mark by a long shot. A sudden snap of the bow demeaning me; and all my efforts to get it right. Makes me feel foolish for ever daring to care. Oh dear Lord help me, for I've no threshold for this kind of pain or these childish games cupid plays. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
A pretty sweet heart like you should have herself a loving Valentine! Sometimes I feel like ive been hit with a broken arrow too! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your sadness! (kiss on cheek) Soon you will be showered with cupids arrows directly and true love will come and forever throb your heart with happiness! Keep the faith, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh I feel the heart ache radiate from the screen....this made my eyes sting.....you write so emotionally....*hugs* I hope you are ok  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, See now...I hate that you have to feel that way! You need feel no shame. Regret I could concede. But I hate the thought of shame. And as for cupid...he has screwed up before, I can attest. Any Questions?  You sure did emote well in this one. A "bluesserenade". |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you. life goes on! *sigh* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Blues, you were just shot with the wrong arrow. Your arrow is still in 'the quiver' waiting for the right moment. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* my heart goes out to you....that you have to suffer this kind of pain..I know it well...I wish I could make dreams come true and yours would be the granting of your heart's desire...**big big hugs** Please try to have a HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I like the idea of being left in the quiver! Thank you for that thought Midnitesun. Startime~ no one can make our dreams come true, not even ourselves. Thank you for your comforting words. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Blues Serenade, we may not be able to make all our dreams come true but we can get some of what we want. Keep that smile and I am sure you will find the right one for you. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
~~sigh~~all these sad poems on such a beautilful day. I hope your hurts all heal and that those broken arrows are long forgotten memories soon! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dee~ Thank you for that, I shall not stop smilng, not ever never. Ironically there are no tears in the end just lessons to learn from. PB4S~ It's a sharp pain all right, but this too shall pass. It's not my thing to write so sadly please forgive my melancholy mood. I'm a big girl!  Thanks. |
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