Whimsical (A Valentine Poem)

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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2002-02-13 10:02 PM

Whimsical

A soft dusting of kisses
Touch my quivering skin
--Sweetness almost unbearable--
And I abandon myself to you
In moments of velvet dark,
My soul trembling
In the reflection of your eyes.

Whimsical shadows
Fall like cloud-woven filigree
Around our silhouettes
--As our minds entangle--
With dreamy confessions
Of subterranean desire.

Your arms--like wings--
Enfold around my lonely form
While you chase away my phantoms
--With delicate devotion--
And so I gladly relinquish
My sorrowed, sinking blackness
To your silver buoyancy.

Love--capricious, yet concrete
Is what we have surrendered to...
And I know that in this submission
We have found Eternity.

*This is for Abrahm, of course, and I'm taking a risk my posting it tonight since I'm giving it to him tomorrow..I hope he doesn't find it!*

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2002-02-13 10:09 PM

It's beautiful! I'm sure he's going to be thrilled with it. I bet you get a big kiss from him!

Mistletoe Angel

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2 posted 2002-02-13 10:11 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know Abraham will love this forever and fall in love with you all oer again every day! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are soooooo romantic, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sahring!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-02-13 10:23 PM

Very beautiful. I think you will have a Happy Valentine, when you give him this.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-02-14 11:18 PM

*sigh* I absolutely love this poem, sweetheart

A perfect Valentine's Day gift. This is one I'll have with me through out life's journey, as we go together down that road.

"Love--capricious, yet concrete
Is what we have surrendered to...
And I know that in this submission
We have found Eternity."

Absolutely beautiful

"A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein

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