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Love Letters in the Skies
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Love Letters in the Skies |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Near the mesa pottery of the desert dances a night-blooming cereus essence of trumpet petals and sculptures of red-orange fruit unfurls to the light of the moon Pioneer spirits gallops a lost tomahawk trail sweet love letters written within lilac smoke of pow wow skies Thunder drums' serenade as she gazes into his electric dark eyes His gentle kiss tastes of cranberry rain in the seclusion of the desert He slithers upon her skin like a Diamondback sighing like a coyote beneath waterfalls of moonlight A warm whisper of a lost dream spirit awaken her blue orchid eyes Was she gazing into the mirror of a rising apache moon? touched by a reflection of once was gone forever like a night-blooming cereus touched by the eyes of the sun A Vesta Crescent mariposa dances within an adobe breeze "Silence is a friend who will never betray." — Confucius [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-13-2002 05:58 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
written in the stars, indeed! Love the gentle beat of rhythm that graces this piece. Oh, my, but I did enjoy!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Contrasting images confuse me here. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Absolutely beautiful, Victoria. Thanks for sharing. ((Victoria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
serenity...thank you so much for peeking in..glad you enjoyed interloper...ill be glad to explain if need be...what part dont you understand? newell..thank you so much..thank you for peeking in.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooooohhhhh...this is breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words and imagery always paint wonderlands of love before our very eyes! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is another classic work of art! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sweet noah..i was inspired by a trip to santa fe...glad you enjoyed hugss ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welll ~V~ WOW whata LOVE LETTER.....very lovely and soooo romantic..... H U G S Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 05:27 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lauren..always nice to hear from you hugs vandana..thank you very much for peeking in |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Now this is fantastic, Victoria, this is truly wonderful writing. floriaFloria |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Victoria! What you do to me when you speak Adobe! *s* This had all the earmarks of authentic Native American imagery, yet all the loving trademarks of , well...Victoria! it's all good...and as they say: the West is the Best. You just proved it! tSR with a big smile for ya |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you floria...very much hugss SR..thank you ..i do appreciate your kind comments..glad to see you back again... as always  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another gem from the poetess of the skies. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra ..hugss...thanks for peeking in hon.. ~Vic |
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