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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2002-02-13 03:20 PM

Within the in between
The pause of heart beating
Time dissolved into life
The moment, fleeting

And still I felt it happen
In the fail of my exhale
Breath caught in the memorizing
Of your every detail

Eyes captured pictures
Mind photography
Forever ingrained
kept inside, romantic soul of me

The record needle skipped
kicked back into play
love at first sight?
…..more than I can say……..

~SEA~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

1 posted 2002-02-13 03:25 PM

Your writing always amazes me. You can say so much with so few words. Another beauty!

(((hugs)))

me

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-13 03:33 PM

A wonderful poetic jewel. Ah! the sweet words, you pen. They melt my heart. Thank you for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-13 03:45 PM

This...is poetry in motion!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-13 03:48 PM

Gal, you make the page leap off the screen straight to my heart ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-13 04:08 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) May the touch of romance forever bring a smile to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-02-13 04:20 PM

And still I felt it happen
In the fail of my exhale
Breath caught in the memorizing
Of your every detail

Eyes captured pictures
Mind photography
Forever ingrained
kept inside, romantic soul of me
=========================================

*SIGH*
(says I, the moth)and(IWIHWT)

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2002-02-13 04:29 PM

Susan,

You alwayssssss are so incredable chickie

You find the perfect pictures.. and the perfect words

Happy Valentine's Day

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2002-02-13 04:32 PM

Love the title, and I do the same thing..Memory photography...almost wish I didn't understand this so well...sighing back at you!

Beautiful, Sue.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2002-02-13 05:15 PM

when it happens
it is morning and evening
all dressed as heaven

lovely work SEA

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2002-02-13 05:39 PM

loved it

Effigy
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since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

11 posted 2002-02-13 05:40 PM

Very nice. Brings back some nice memories.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-02-13 06:28 PM

Sue, this is so beautiful and a perfect picture as well!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-02-13 06:32 PM

This is so so nice sea, and the dancers are the same as the ones in my music box, I love it.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

14 posted 2002-02-13 08:57 PM

Total WOW!!!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

15 posted 2002-02-13 09:20 PM

Very beautiful, SEA! Breathtaking!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2002-02-13 09:23 PM

Love it, love it, love it, did I say I love it

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

17 posted 2002-02-13 10:17 PM

Susan--Just beautiful!

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