Open Poetry #18 |
To Kiss My Valentine |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
To Kiss My Valentine I close my eyes and see you there reaching to take my hand As you touch my skin I’m aware of tingles in my hand My heart beats fast as I prepare to go with love’s demand No other feeling can compare to give to heart’s demand A sigh escapes my tender lips, you whisper in my ear Your hands enclose about my hips while breath tickles my ear There’s nothing, on earth, can ellipse the words I love to hear We are wrapped within passion’s grips with sighs that none can hear Are you there wanting to delight a Star on Valentine? This is the dream I have each night to kiss my Valentine Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww...you need more than a kiss sweet lady....how about kissed and whisked away on a hot air balloon ride as the stars come out! (hugs) I ya |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
RosePetal....you are just too wonderful...what a romantic idea....I love you too dear one...*giggling* a hot air balloon...mmmmm under the stars...oh yes that would work.. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such a perfect thought, isn't it? I think I remember it was a nice experience..to have a valentine. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And then ... and then ... ??? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
And then, explode in fiery creation of new galaxies! ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
If I could wave a wand and grant this for you dear friend.... but I can send you an extra big hug and a special Valentine's kiss on your sweet cheek Startime....Wonderful poem Karen!!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, Awwwwwwww Karen. This is so sweet. *hugs* You'll find your valentine.. and he will be better than the dream model Have a good Valentine's. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Karen, my dear friend! This was great, and you will find your valentine..promise. This poems shows how big your heart really is. Loved it babe! ~~Jeff~~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Seems a day of forlorn dreams. Enjoyed. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A romantic and beautiful piece of poetry. Definitely worthy of a special Valentine. Well written, I enjoyed! *Krista Knutson* |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well Karen, if you aren’t the queen of romance, I don’t know who is. What a perfect kiss this is. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely Karen. And you are most deserving of that special someone! ~Valentine Hugs to you sweet poetess~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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