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Startime
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0 posted 2002-02-13 02:28 PM


To Kiss My Valentine

I close my eyes and see you there
reaching to take my hand
As you touch my skin I’m aware
of tingles in my hand

My heart beats fast as I prepare
to go with love’s demand
No other feeling can compare
to give to heart’s demand

A sigh escapes my tender lips,
you whisper in my ear
Your hands enclose about my hips
while breath tickles my ear

There’s nothing, on earth, can ellipse
the words I love to hear
We are wrapped within passion’s grips
with sighs that none can hear

Are you there wanting to delight
a Star on Valentine?
This is the dream I have each night
to kiss my Valentine

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2002 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-02-13 02:34 PM


awww...you need more than a kiss sweet lady....how about kissed and whisked away on a hot air balloon ride as the stars come out!
(hugs)

I ya

Startime
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2 posted 2002-02-13 02:37 PM


RosePetal....you are just too wonderful...what a romantic idea....I love you too dear one...*giggling* a hot air balloon...mmmmm under the stars...oh yes that would work.. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2002-02-13 02:46 PM


Such a perfect thought, isn't it? I think I remember it was a nice experience..to have a valentine.
Sandra

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-02-13 03:57 PM


And then ... and then ... ???

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-02-13 04:03 PM


And then, explode in fiery creation of new galaxies!

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

brianbeaudry
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6 posted 2002-02-13 07:30 PM


If I could wave a wand and grant this for you dear friend.... but I can send you an extra big hug and a special Valentine's kiss on your sweet cheek Startime....Wonderful poem Karen!!!
rosepetals25
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7 posted 2002-02-13 07:49 PM


Karen,

   Awwwwwwww Karen. This is so sweet. *hugs* You'll find  your valentine.. and he will be better than the dream model Have a good Valentine's.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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8 posted 2002-02-13 07:52 PM


Karen, my dear friend!

This was great, and you will find your valentine..promise.  This poems shows how big your heart really is.

Loved it babe!

~~Jeff~~

RSWells
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9 posted 2002-02-13 08:14 PM


Seems a day of forlorn dreams. Enjoyed.
Alwye
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10 posted 2002-02-13 10:10 PM


A romantic and beautiful piece of poetry.  Definitely worthy of a special Valentine.  Well written, I enjoyed!  

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Tracey
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11 posted 2002-02-13 10:23 PM


Well Karen, if you aren’t the queen of romance, I don’t know who is. What a perfect kiss this is.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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12 posted 2002-02-13 10:30 PM



This is lovely Karen.
And you are most deserving of that special someone!
~Valentine Hugs to you sweet poetess~

~Love transcends time and space~

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