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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Ok. . . so, I put the Mass series on hold for a couple of days because Poet deVine wanted me to write some Valentine's Poetry. . . sue me. . .  *watch me watch me make the sun wait so I can make the stars shine just a little longer for you watch me watch me watch me take the moon's beams and weave around your heart the light of my love for you watch me watch me watch me touch the wind sending on its currents the voice of my heart's song watch me watch me watch me open up my arms and take you away my love to that place where we can finally be watch me ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I am so delighted to see you writing love poems too, this is gorgeous! (sigh) May she forever light your heart with moon beams and shower you with joy forever, we all love you so much, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Well, now that didn't hurt too much did it? It is sweet and romantic...a very nice valetine! The mass series can continue now. |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oh, Sven, how absolutely beautiful! This makes me sigh and think of my husband (especially since he got me a telescope so he could give me the moon and stars). Absolutely lovely! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Friend Sven,...this is just lovely, warm and soothing and so well written. *Peace. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Looks like they are watching. And you didn't disappoint. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 10:35 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
watch me open up my arms and take you away my love to that place where we can finally be watch me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OH MY!!! How I love this!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
my friend,loved every word you said in this poem!!!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh wow. I love this poem. Nan |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Watch me write how very much I love this poem. Nice. floriaFloria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hm, do you feel anyone looking over your shoulder? I like theis, valentine poems are fun. I am living vicariously through everyone elses valentines this year. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (02-13-2002 02:36 PM).] |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh, Sven, this is positively lovely. I don't have the opportunity to come in here and read very often but when I do I always look for your name. Wonderful! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'm watching already ... so show me Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands Strut yore stuff Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Watch me stand in awe at your romantic soul. I'm glad you wrote this it's awesome Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
We are watching you dipping your pen into emotion spreading the map of your soul and charting inspiration on the course to your heart. We are watching you and loving the poet you are. Well..okay...compared to yours, its nothing...but you are a wonderful poet, and what would we do if we couldn't watch our one and only Sven Pen inspire with the smiles of his writing? Wonderful, you.  For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
very romantic heart, Sven! Cor |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ How lovely to see this right before Valentines day, so romantic my friend.... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 06:31 PM).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Indeed.. we all watch and hope that through your words, you are well, Sir. enjoyed this. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well I am very glad she did...I have miss these beautiful words of love that your heart pens...**big hugs**  HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you everyone. . . may you all have a wonderful day today. . . thanks. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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