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Open Poetry #18

I'm Sorry

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2002-02-13 09:35 AM

I'm Sorry

I'm sorry your in pain
I understand it
For I feel the same
The tring to rebuild
The once self asured self
Every song
Every landmark
Day dreams are the worst
The wondering , the what ifs
Oh how it hurts
At least you know
You were special, number one
I'm just second best
Yesterdays song
I still don't know what
I feel about it all
To this day,
I'm just sorry
For both of us and our pain

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-02-13 09:43 AM

Zinsser,
I'm sure your forgiven, enjoyed.

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-02-14 01:07 AM

Seymour.... Thank You so much for your reply.... I would be very interested in what your interpitation of this poem is..... : )

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