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Raggae Valentine
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Raggae Valentine |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“REGGAE VALENTINE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Caribbean flavor, beat of bongos… Rhythm flowing guitars disclose… Dancing together, swaying with me… Gentle touching, what will be… This special woman body is rhythmic… Eyes mine to hers feeling the magic… Special this night, lover’s combine… Different flavor reggae valentine… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (02-13-2002 01:44 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, you got me! and I see you grinning. Put on an accent into the read out loud, and what a play on words! Well done, Mr. Charles! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this one, it's so inventive and original, this is sooooooo cute! I bet Bob Marley would have loved to put this to music, may the magic of true love forever shine in your loving heart! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know Bill..leave it to you to come up with this sweet beat! Ya gotta love it!! Your pen dances down the page in this Valentine! Good one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Got me longing for the tropics here....especially since it's very cold in PA right now |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Heard the music, felt the beat, now I'm ready for something to eat. Well done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yah mon. . . I be likin' this one BC. . . it has style mon. . .  ------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Hummmmm...I think all Valentines taste sweet, no matter their flavor! Nice one! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like this! Nan |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Reggae, yes, nice beat, love it. great write Bill. floriaFloria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Let's fly off to Jamaica, mon. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ah yes we be jammin' mon! I enjoy this |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, I have to agree with hoot_owl_rn... the nice WARM weather would nice ... its freezing here in PA. I enjoyed this one It made me smile Have a good Valentine's Bill  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ This had a nice beat to it, very musical.... great write, fun to hear the beat in my head....Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 11:17 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gotta love variety! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the romance of your words had me swaying to their music....beautiful...lucky lady she is who holds your heart. **big hugs**  HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAYLove I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To all - I appreciate all the replies to this one. Do like dis one mon, dis me do... BC |
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