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There Together (A duet with Greeneyes)
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There Together (A duet with Greeneyes) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States 
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Greeneyes & Larry C I drifted off…sleeping without a care In a moment, I spent forever there Incredible what love would do If it was shared by time with you I saw eternity that night Where fragrant breezes blow As pale moon arose to candle light Among the afterglow Of my heart entwined with you Pulsing from the night so new Amid the stars that gently see What is you do to me Looking into your eyes I know what they tell me They show your heart, undisguised A love I feel deeply As I continue dreaming of you I’m awaiting the reality of your presence Having you right here next to me Basking in the glow of your essence Enveloped in a dream That smile upon your lips A moment as it seemed To hold you while you slept |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry & Greeneyes - this one is to be treasured. Beautiful flow from two excellent poets... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Thank you kind sir!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is a beautiful duet! You two really made some pretty music on these blue pages.   to both of you. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well done, I think we should have a "Pipps Paring Party" for Valentine's Day but suppose it is too late now. Excellent duo. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet freinds, your beautiful words always create such pretty music together that fill these pages with the spirit of love! (smiles) We all love you both so much, you are delights to us all! BRAVO!!! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Larry and Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
oh so romantically penned! wonderful! .. both of you! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun,  That's you between us! Thanks.Mysteria, Excellent idea! And thanks. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, These are so fun...aren't they? Thanks.dor, Thanks a bunch. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
For all that responded, thank you.... He has been a pleasure to work with.... Larry~ you know this has been more then fun....thank you for your patience and humor with the rhyme.... HUGS to all... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 04:40 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aaaawww this is good writing from the two of you! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, Thank you. I work with one of the best. Wahoo! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Well, how to express my gratitude? I find it so delightful to do these duets with you! And the bonus is the sweet personality and talent you bring to the table. I appreciate you so very much and even more. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Vandana, Thank you for the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I saw eternity that night Where fragrant breezes blow As pale moon arose to candle light Among the afterglow Of my heart entwined with you Pulsing from the night so new Amid the stars that gently see What is you do to me ===================================== WAAAAAAAYYYY COOOOOOOL Lauren rhymed!!! and baby its divine  Larry yer da man!!! This is perfect poetic paring... Hey L...remember a note a long time ago... some thing about "bike & trike" LOL Well i just love seeing poets try new things...but girlie..for all my beggin for rhymes from you...theres not a thing lacking in however style you pen in. Larry me thinks you bring out the best in your partners. well done you two!! Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Janet Marie~ He has a way of doing that.....and its been a delight with every write....I adore ya sweet friend....  Larry~ Thanks again for this GREAT write.... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 08:23 PM).] |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
WOW! You 2 hit the nail on this one. AMAZING! ~~Jeff~~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You two are a great writing team.... I hope you do it again!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I saw eternity that night Where fragrant breezes blow As pale moon arose to candle light Among the afterglow Of my heart entwined with you Pulsing from the night so new Amid the stars that gently see What is you do to me" (I could have just copied the whole poem!) You two ROCK!! I do hope to see another duet from you |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
First Lauren, I absolutely love that you jump in and help answer these responses. Thank you and again you make an awesome partner! Jeff, Cool. That's even more fun when it's done by two. I get to share it! Thanks. Lyra, Thanks and I hope what you hope! Hint...hint. Susan, The queen of romantic poetry! Wow...  |
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