Open Poetry #18 |
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Miner's Life |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada ![]() |
Miner’s Life Walking through this mining town once prosperous and grand In tribute to golden years the head-frames there still stand All of them are tall of stature, all similar of design Portals to the underworld, where men once stood in line It was not a life of ease for those who toiled below For to their tortured bodies, much harm did it bestow It troubled them in later years with lungs that turned to stone And bent backs and crippled limbs from mangled broken bone Each day they would descend much like entering a tomb Working in an environment where danger ever loomed Blasting and digging holes in mother earth’s entrails Breathing in of rock and smoke and air that’s very stale Their fingers white and numb from the vibrations of the drill Breaking rock and moving stone with the power of sheer will Wet and damp and very cold, they worked around the clock To make investors happy and increase values of the stock Many times a cave-in would rob a miner of his life Leaving behind young children and many a grieving wife But the miners would all join force to dig free the stope Until the rock was dug away they still hung on to hope My father was such a man, he worked in many mines On his face hard life and pain had written many lines His body hard as steel and his arms were like twin oaks The earth would seem to tremble each time that he spoke He made it through a lifetime of working in a hole Miserable and dirty, it could bend a strong man’s soul At heart he was a man of love, of kind and gentle measure In this mind and soul, his memories my greatest treasure I love and miss you Dad |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Brian, this is sooooooooo both sad and beautiful, my heart cries out to all those miners lives who are lost by lung cancer of the mines and losing time from their families, but I am also so happy your father is a survivor of it all and so happy to see you always! (big hugggssssss) This one had me flooding with tears, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, this is such a heartwarming tribute! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Your father would've been very proud to see what a wonderful tribute you just gave to him. A friend of mine also had a father that worked in these dark, cold and damp holes. The coal dust finally took his life and left my friend and orphan, to be raised by his grandmother. I much appreciate not only your post on my poem, but you posting this so that I could read about a great man and father. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian So descriptive were your words and how vividly I could imagine how it must have been down there in the mine. We have many old disused mines here in the state of Victoria where I live, one particular place they have made a tourist attraction - called Sovereign Hill. Such an interesting place to visit and we actually toured down one of the mines and it literally sent shivers down my spine as I heard what those men went through. This was a wonderful dedication to your father and I know for a fact that you've done him proud. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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srsmith25 Junior Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 22Indiana |
Very nice tribute Brian. I read it twice. I sent you an e-mail, but haven't heard back from you. I hope you got it. If you would like to e-mail me, my e-mail is: [email protected]. Stacy Smith |
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