Open Poetry #18 |
What I Thought of You in My Dreams |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
What did I think of you my love, in the dreams of my sleep? I thought of holding you close to my heart, forever to keep. I thought of dancing with you across a sky full of stars. But, most of all, my love, I thought of being where you are. I thought of having our eyes meet cross a room full of souls, Where yours would be the only one that my hands could hold. I thought of tasting your lips so sweet for the very first time And forever my love, tending together our love light’s shine. These are the things that I thought about you, my love, in dreams. Thoughts that are carried away to you on softest moon’s beams. Thoughts that stream across miles and flow gently into your head And keep us softly in love, while we’re alone, for now, in our beds. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. [This message has been edited by Moonlight Romeo (02-12-2002 02:15 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice-- soft and flowing There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
And what you may have thought of me in dreams, sir may just have well been true for in the night we have have belonged but the day shall soon see us too. What you've said of eyes and souls sits kindly on my heart this lady now loving you has wildly played her part. But I confess my present thoughts, Sir to certainly be less tame for what I'm thinking of you now is slightly off your aim. But your love is shown in this I'm sure and mine in this I know so take my rhyme of rough, Dear Sir and watch it, with tenderness, grow. For I may not have a rhythm like yours and stars may not sing for me but I am inspired nonetheless that your loving words are free. No price upon my heart for dancing in your joy No eyes to seek the know of this just Lady and Sir twirling in bliss. Just know that now the answer sought is one I feel I knew because when I reached to my desires they drove themeselve straight to you. So sitting here on lonely chair I begin to ache but to speak of that, Dear Sir another room, that would take. Hope you don't mind some inspiration, Sweet Sir. This was lovely writing. I am many. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...wonderfully said. Love Siofra's response. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (big hugggsssss) May the love of your dreams embrace you soon and may every night she rest close to your heart and fill you with eternal happines, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved it! Bravo. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How beautifully enchanting this is. She has certainly inspired sweet thoughts in you. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
See what you're doing? Going around inspiring people, Romeo. You should consider them honored to be in your poetic presence. Wonderfully done. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Juliet herself would swoon over this poem. Sandra |
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