Open Poetry #18 |
Valentine poem JOUST-1st entry |
jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
I figured we should have a little joust on who is the best Valentine poet...so I challenge anyone out there with my induction of... "Dreamland" Floating in a bubble of dreams with little drips of light dropping from the beams of heaven like rain, but in after night Each drop carries her picture one a different from the other Each drop a differnt mixture Of the emotions that tug her From man to man in search for I and a longing in her heart to be undone When we come together as Valentines And we no longer shall be alone [This message has been edited by jfreak (02-12-2002 05:13 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice write. I already did about 7 valentine poems..so..I guess they are all entered? Anyway, this is a good one. Sandra |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Well thank you Sandra...we used to do this all time. Have a little competition of the sort, just to see what would take place you know. See what people would come up with but I guess I am not the person to get it started. LOL J~ |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya, Jfreak. Did you want us to add on our own thread or put them here in this thread? For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Hey it doesn't matter to me...if you post them here it might get crowded pretty quickly...so it might be best to post them seperately but just dictate in your title line that it's an entry in the Joust! J~ |
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