Open Poetry #18 |
In My Bed |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
In My Bed "How handsome you are, my lover! Oh, how charming! And our bed is verdant." NIV Song of Solomon1:16 Woman is the womb of all Creation As man simply fertilizes her egg And in joyful passionate elation All flesh is renewed in birth as we lay. But the Spirit of God has been broken As man chose to love himself over God And now bitter words are often spoken As man walks along over darkened sod. Man calls other spirits to kill in war Creates sorrow, pain, suffering and death Destroys the planet earth with darkened star And suffocates the land polluting breath. As God looked down from heavens high above At man He made to live in joy and peace He sent His Son to show us how to love We killed Him in our hate and slow release. And now He calls all women to His Throne With passions man will fight and die to take Says call My Wayward Boys to be My Own For, Woman I have made you for Love's sake. In My Bed. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Steak of Silver Springs, Florida February 12, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write, SS. You could get lots of mail on this one. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thanks for dropping in, Interloper. All mail welcome! newellusher@hotmail.com. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-12-2002 11:57 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy sometimes I’m awe struck by your writing, this is one of those times. I’m speechless. Truly this is one of your utter utter best. I would write more but I’m truly stunned by the wonder of your words Do you know you are amazingly talented? Of course you don’t but you are indeed. Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it. As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
darling girl, Marsha. Again I am deeply humbled and honored by your music of praise. Your sweet words are pure honey to my soul. xo ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-12-2002 12:53 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is beautiful. Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Sandra. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Newell, I've read a lot of your work and while I can't say I particularly agree with your interpretaton of the bible, I do know good writing when I see it. This is good writing, sir. Much enjoyed! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Michael, I am deeply humbled and honored by your words. I have much respect for your knowledge and understanding of writing, sir. Thank you. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-12-2002 03:18 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Silver, I have to agree with the others, your writing is wonderful I enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Tara. ((Tara)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Newell....I think this is your absolute best....How thoughtful of you to honor women in such a special way. and also how smart! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Madame, I just try to find the truth. And as I searched and searched and studied scripture and prayed, challenging everything I had been taught, as it wouldn't stand reality testing, these ideas came to me over several years, piece by piece, like a jigsaw puzzle coming together. I believe that women are very special to God. They are the jewels of God's Kingdom. And I believe that through God's Spirit of Love, incarnated in Christ according to Christianity, women are our best hope to return man to God and sanity. Besides, I just love women, all of them. You girls are so very wonderful. ((Madame Chipmunk)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too think this is one of your utterly best, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) Your words glorify women soooo beautifully, sweet friend, this is a true gem from your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sharing your faith through these beautiful words is a wonderful gift! i admire a person who is not afraid to offer their faith openly .... and you do it so elequently! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sweet Noah, for your very kind and loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, doreen for your kind wonds. I am honored. ((doreen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
So very beautiful Newell. floria Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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