Open Poetry #18 |
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Mists of Imagination |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston ![]() |
I reach, not blinking. Afraid you will disappear into the mists of my imagination. Fingers trembling, heart pounding, tears welling. I watch you swim through the depths of my joy. Until at last my eyes flutter allowing the tears to run their course. And I sigh, feeling your fingers entwine with mine. |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aw, this is sweet, it reminded me of falling into my loves arms, this is incredible, love it sweetie! ![]() Joanna |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Softly romantic... enjoyed! ~Tier |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() Awwww Lucie! I know just what you mean! Tears of joy are the best kind! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Lucie! Thank you for sharing with us! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely...touching, and ever so gentle. Enjoyed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lucie, Awwwwwwww I LOVE this!!!! It is so sweet... so touching. I'm very glad I stopped in to see this one ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lucie, you romantic little devil, you! ![]() |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This reads like a moment paused and then the tears. *sigh* I LOVE what this did to me. ![]() For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lucie~ This is just beautiful.... ![]() Lauren~ Step through the |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A beautiful moment captured so nicely ![]() Loved it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I sigh, feeling your fingers entwine with mine. ================================= yeppers...thats the moment of content isnt it...makes me sigh too. This is beautiful poetess Lucie...good to see you back. ![]() Some find subtlety in strangers, |
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