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The Magic of Dew
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The Magic of Dew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Magic of Dew I spent the morning collecting dew A little for me a little for you The mist of the morning’s magic bree Just enough for some raspberry tea Now I will pack my Randy and fly Across the blue of a silver sky Into a secret greenery glen And woo her with my magic pen. A moth turned butterfly waits for me And God she loves this raspberry tea. We sweeten it with nectar of flowers It’s just the thing for romantic hours. We walk on the beach of timeless shore Make inroads into the evermore And ride the tides in shameless abide On the wiles of our passion tide And though she is but a phantom seem I would have no other, wile or dream. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is beautifully romantic  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh Sy.. You're so easy.. A little raspberry tea'll dew ya...  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sweetly magical , I loved everything about this Seymour Hope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Upon a heart in all that's true Here sit thee, collecting dew a bit of fairy's dust appears upon the wing of Moth-Queen dear Now take a brush within your hand and paint the scenery O so grand 'tis within the power of all you wield and now I'll sit in gentle yield as before my eyes you grace the sky with winsome dancing butterflies and in the sheen of morn's explore take us all to Forevermore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well I don't know what they put in that tea... me thinks it must be pure brewed ecstasy. All I know is it makes me free ... free to just be the me of me. I can sip it hot to a steaming degree or drink it iced till near freezing infinity. Wont you join me and see if you agree ... I'll take you on a very merry berry spree. So I will set the table for tea at three ... in Eden's garden under the apple tree. We will sip our way to forevermore's fantasy where we will find the key to love's guarantee. Flying fancy free in our fantasy's glee ... out to sea across waves of raspberry Chablis. I'll write your name across the sky's marquee there for all to see in rhymed decree. But there's one thing that I must say in plea ... there is something I crave more than my tea. 'Tis the time I spend steeping the verse of thee ... 'tis the time I sip the of thy potpourri of poetry. Yes I would trade my red rush of berry bree ... but not my rhyme scheme dreams flying free with thee. *winkiewinkie*   me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you sweet, Nan, Yes I'm a push over. HopeS, Sunshine, Your poem blew all the clouds away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are my potpourri of poetry. And I really don't need the pageantry But it's oh so pleasant to fly with thee. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
well done Seymour this set a tone like the sunset and moon lovely work |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you dew write well Thank you. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Seymour, This is so pretty. Nan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Lovely comment, thank you. Interloper, Cute, thank you. Pilgrimage, Thank you. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
The magic of you The picture you drew Wants to make me glue To these pages of blue Thank you, Sy...like this... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You fly with your words, no need for wings. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
We walk on the beach of timeless shore Make inroads into the evermore And ride the tides in shameless abide On the wiles of our passion tide It is magical and so much more. Must be something special in that tea~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Amigo, I like your comment. Martie, BluesSenerade, It's the dew, the nectar, the sector. LOL thank you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy...very enjoyable...loved the flow and the rhyme of this... |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seymour what a wonderful poem great flow, and I love the sentiment,collecting dew, how original floriaFloria |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sighing at this one. How perfectly magical this is. I so love your rhymes, and I so love jm’s responses to them. You’ve both given me a smile many a time you know. I don’t know what’s in that raspberry tea, but methinks it agrees with you. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is an absolute beauty, Sy...Please give my regards to Randy.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Glad you enjoyed, thanks. Floria, Thank you Tracey, It's great stuff. Thank you. Madame C, Randy blows you a |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes very romantic Sy..raspberry tea sweetened with flowers..mmmm...nicely done ~Victoria~ "Silence is a friend who |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Yep...was the Raspberry Tea alright...yummy stuff! And a very beautiful poem! |
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