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Flight of Night in Day (sonnet)
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Flight of Night in Day (sonnet) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Moments of love that take the light of day and cast the fear of heart and soul away In times of life are rife in love endure as one of soul does make romance so pure. I wish to have and hold and keep you well For in my loving arms I shall foretell. Of dreams and thoughts of two becoming one in night of moon and light of hottest sun. If not for time my words I would beseech and give a touch that comes with softest reach. And as the dark of day becomes the night Love’s bird does wing and leave in guarded flight. For flight in night of dark does take to fear and walk of day in light of sun does cheer. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! This is another fabulous sonnet, sweet friend, may the sunshine of day forever fill your heart with loves promise and may you rest close to your loves heart every night with compassion and strength for enduring eternal love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sonnet here Barry! Enjoyed so much tonight! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy and Noah....Thank you very much for the kindness of reading and posting...Much appreciated... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so romantic and a sonnet tooo...oh gosh...do you think there is a man out there like you for me....Ask Lou to take a look around and see if she can find your twin...*sigh* I love it..**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy my stars this is utterly utterly gorgeous, every time I read one of your beautiful poems I think he can’t possibly get any better, and yet you do. This is why I had to include you in my Valentine Thank you, your writing is incandescent it illumes the soul with such sweet delight. Thank you darling boy for the gift of this pure wondrous star-shine, it truly does vibrate in the air with a sound of pure joy.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Uh-huh! Write on! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful love poem, Barry...  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus this is wonderful. Oh the rythm, it just flowed, Beautifully done. floriaFloria |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Of dreams and thoughts of two becoming one in night of moon and light of hottest sun. i love that verse...very romantic..nicely done as always barry... ~Vic "Silence is a friend who |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully romantic Magnus, absolutely. Maree |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
ooops, sorry doing the library thing  Maree |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Wonderful and romantic sonnet my friend...great talent!!! |
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