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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-02-11 09:37 PM


Moments of love that take the light of day
and cast the fear of heart and soul away
In times of life are rife in love endure
as one of soul does make romance so pure.

I wish to have and hold and keep you well
For in my loving arms I shall foretell.
Of dreams and thoughts of two becoming one
in night of moon and light of hottest sun.

If not for time my words I would beseech
and give a touch that comes with softest reach.
And as the dark of day becomes the night
Love’s bird does wing and leave in guarded flight.

For flight in night of dark does take to fear
and walk of day in light of sun does cheer.

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-11 09:47 PM




BRAVO!!! This is another fabulous sonnet, sweet friend, may the sunshine of day forever fill your heart with loves promise and may you rest close to your loves heart every night with compassion and strength for enduring eternal love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-11 10:11 PM


Beautiful sonnet here Barry!
Enjoyed so much tonight!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-02-12 07:09 PM


Nancy and Noah....Thank you very much for
the kindness of reading and posting...Much
appreciated...

Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-13 05:17 PM


*sigh* so romantic and a sonnet tooo...oh gosh...do you think there is a man out there like you for me....Ask Lou to take a look around and see if she can find your twin...*sigh* I love it..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2002-02-13 05:36 PM


Magnus darling boy my stars this is utterly utterly gorgeous, every time I read one of your beautiful poems I think he can’t possibly get any better, and yet you do. This is why I had to include you in my Valentine Thank you, your writing is incandescent it illumes the soul with such sweet delight. Thank you darling boy for the gift of this pure wondrous star-shine, it truly does vibrate in the air with a sound of pure joy.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-02-13 05:39 PM


Uh-huh!
Write on!

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7 posted 2002-02-13 05:40 PM


enjoy
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8 posted 2002-02-13 05:46 PM


A beautiful love poem, Barry...

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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9 posted 2002-02-13 06:23 PM


Magnus this is wonderful. Oh the rythm, it just flowed, Beautifully done. floria

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But die with all their music in them"
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10 posted 2002-02-13 06:28 PM


Of dreams and thoughts of two becoming one
in night of moon and light of hottest sun.


i love that verse...very romantic..nicely done as always barry...

               ~Vic

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will never betray."
— Confucius


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11 posted 2002-02-13 07:28 PM


Beautifully romantic Magnus, absolutely.

Maree

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12 posted 2002-02-13 07:29 PM


ooops, sorry doing the library thing

Maree

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13 posted 2002-02-13 07:36 PM


Wonderful and romantic sonnet my friend...great talent!!!
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