The surface of your spirit

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Open Poetry #18

The surface of your spirit

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-02-11 07:51 PM

Just before
the waking of the senses
when life's fragility it's at its peak
I feel your presence
as if in a dream
your lips barely touch me
and without me knowing
you're next to me
We kiss
subliminally
slowly feeling the passion
strong
full of desire
I explore deeply
your soul
only to find out
you're out of touch
I cannot reach you
but I yearn to hold you
so I settle for feeling
the surface of your spirit
on my skin
on my body
in my solitude
and in my dreams

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-11 08:00 PM

oh yes, i can really feel this one!
well done!!!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-11 08:00 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (sigh) May you forever rest on his heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-02-11 08:01 PM

*s..I like this very much

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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