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First Kiss |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Here's a Candy Heart Poem I felt like posting because I've been so happy today thinking maybe really soon I can meet my dream girl Joanna and kiss her! This is for you, my sweet Gwenevere!) FIRST KISS (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/16/01 A first kiss Is the most magical gift of all The moment I touched your lips The heavens pour out, down into your heart I fall You gave me my first kiss Sharing it with you, when our hearts first touched Heartstrings softly twitching, like the flick of a light switch Feeling your love for the first time, wanting to forever love you so much I think all the time about that first kiss Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish We would always be together, two true lovers for all time I'll never forget that first kiss You, my love, have given me the happiest feeling I've ever had From your lovely ruby lips, you gave me, my first kiss And with you, my love, it will never be the last! [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-11-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwwwwww you are really putting me in the valentines spirit!  this is so cute hun |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
What a sweet way to remember one's first kiss... through the gift of poetry! lovely, Noah... ~Tier |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So cute and sweet, I love it. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Noah, sweet, sweet man, this is so pure and innocent, your heart indeed is made of fine honey. I'm sure you are melting Joanna's sweet candy heart. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep, you are just so sweet |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I hope you will meet your sweet Joanna soon and share love's first kiss! ~Hugs and a kiss on the cheek! Nancy~ ~Love transcends time and space~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - I hope your meeting happens for you very soon, and that your first kiss is as nice and is as good as what you described in this poem. Dave |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope you get to see her soon Noah, you sure have a lot of romance to offer. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh wow. I sure do hope you get to meet her soon. Imagine what wonderful poetry that would inspire in both of you. And there's nothing like a first kiss…you’ve captured the magic of it here Noah. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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