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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2002-02-11 07:21 PM


(Here's a Candy Heart Poem I felt like posting because I've been so happy today thinking maybe really soon I can meet my dream girl Joanna and kiss her! This is for you, my sweet Gwenevere!)

FIRST KISS
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/16/01

A first kiss
Is the most magical gift of all
The moment I touched your lips
The heavens pour out, down into your heart I fall

You gave me my first kiss
Sharing it with you, when our hearts first touched
Heartstrings softly twitching, like the flick of a light switch
Feeling your love for the first time, wanting to forever love you so much

I think all the time about that first kiss
Holding you close, watching sparks fly feeling your warm breaths and sighs
And a sour lips were touching, I moaned my happiest wish
We would always be together, two true lovers for all time

I'll never forget that first kiss
You, my love, have given me the happiest feeling I've ever had
From your lovely ruby lips, you gave me, my first kiss
And with you, my love, it will never be the last!

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-11-2002 07:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-11 07:35 PM


awwwwwww you are really putting me in the valentines spirit! this is so cute hun

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2 posted 2002-02-11 08:04 PM


What a sweet way to remember one's first kiss... through the gift of poetry!

lovely, Noah...

~Tier

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3 posted 2002-02-11 08:46 PM


So cute and sweet, I love it.
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4 posted 2002-02-11 09:02 PM


Noah, sweet, sweet man, this is so pure and innocent, your heart indeed is made of fine honey. I'm sure you are melting Joanna's sweet candy heart.
((Noah))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-02-11 09:10 PM


yep, you are just so sweet
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6 posted 2002-02-11 09:20 PM


Oh I hope you will meet your sweet Joanna soon and share love's first kiss!
~Hugs and a kiss on the cheek! Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

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7 posted 2002-02-11 10:09 PM


Noah - I hope your meeting happens for you very soon, and that your first kiss is as nice and is as good as what you described in this poem.

Dave

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8 posted 2002-02-11 11:07 PM


I hope you get to see her soon Noah, you sure have a lot of romance to offer.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-02-11 11:11 PM


Oh wow. I sure do hope you get to meet her soon. Imagine what wonderful poetry that would inspire in both of you. And  there's nothing like a first kiss…you’ve captured the magic of it here Noah.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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