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Knit Together
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Knit Together |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA 
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I feel My life is like A finely hand-knit garment I took years to carefully Create it, and it looks so beautiful However, if one finds a loose thread And tugs it firmly The whole thing will unravel And soon no longer exist All that will be left Is a pile of loose thread Which by itself Amounts to nothing Only after I spend Loving time and effort To reconstruct it Will it be whole and beautiful Once again |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
As it is with so many things.....good thoughts here.  sky |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Very good simile and very true. Thankfully each thread, while it can uncravel, rarely does the whole tapestry unravel. Hope this fine poem was as healing for you to write as it is to read. |
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