Open Poetry #18 |
Control |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Used to be that deodorant that cuts underarm sweat games of control is what one does when a partner sneaks out to bet. you see couples doing their natural, daily routines but think of the control that sticks out in between. I would spray on my underarm and pray that odors would halt control is what a partner does when he finds his mate at fault if self-control is what to do to cut your diet in-take managing other peoples lives is not the way to balance what's at stake. trust your partner's liberty if you see that their freedom is in peril question if the control you use is not a projection of your own devil; as in the case of some female rock stars who were controlled by their jealous mates that led to their major discontent and a change in their fate. Those performers realized that liberty was more important than the love they thought they had public opinion had it that stifling male dominance was bad they turned around and questioned their men about their restrictive bans. that led to more respect from their respective fans. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-11-2002 12:13 AM).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Being controled by someone isn't cool. I think a relationship should be 50/50 when it comes to decisions. There are men out there who like things their way and then there are women who want to wear the pants. You've done good with this one |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Rose Petal, Find this very appropriate for the valentine period too! along with picking topics touching on the gods, games we play here's another series on human characters and behavioural traits..when its tough to find rhymes I'll stick this into free verse |
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