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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Thunder plays its tune Rain dances at Spirit Rock Dreamtime awakens [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-07-2002 09:59 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I've missed you and your gorgeous words so much, it's so great to have you back! (kiss on cheek) May you always hold your dreams close and dream on happily forever! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mauree, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-05-2002 10:33 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is a brilliantly constructed piece~ I could sense movement flowing it~ Nice to see you sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwww, this is cool, I love everything you write, awesome! Love it!  Joanna |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree-- I see more than one striation in your spirit rock. Hugs..so glad to see you posting! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Interesting Haiku |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved it. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all for your kind remarks and for stopping by and having a read. Maree |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Ahhhhh -- lovely image in this Mmy-- you are getting better and better at Haiku. I will look for more from you ps... why didn't i get sent an email that you had posted something new???---Hmmmm?--lol Hugs JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Dark Angel, I like this, nice to see your pic. floriaFloria |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey luscious! I love the spirituality here... sounds like you took a nice vacation! We've missed you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This isn't about Ururu is it? It sounds like a poem based on aboriginal creation myth... Cool! Nice to read an Mmy Haiku again.. how you been dear?  K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie, my dear Thank you for your lovely reply and next time I'l lbe sure to send you a link ok hugsHi Floria, glad you liked and thanks for stopping by Vandana, Thank you HEY GORGEOUS!! Where ya been? Have missed you! Nope no vacation, but am going on one soon hehe want to meet me in Melbourne? A friend of mine compossed a piece of spritual music about Uluru (Ayers Rock)It inspired this little Haiku Thanks for reading hon.K, hmmm you're on the right track dear hehe.. it's actaully Uluru. Glad you thought it was cool and it's nice to see you here SB hugs Maree |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Maree, it's so nice to read your poetry again. This created a beautiful visual.  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a lovely poem. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Elizabeth, it's so nice to see you, thank you for your lovely reply Smartchick, I thank you for stopping by and your lovely reply Maree |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh... duh K Well, at least I tried right? [f] K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hehe SB, yes true, you tried.. ya done good!  umm could you tell me what the [f] is for? Maree |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wow.I love this.It brings up so many images. peaches |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark Angel, so much with so little. You wanna meet me in Melbourne? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A very enjoyable piece here - gave me cause to smile. Thank you Michael |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked the mere mention of dreamtime~ can almost hear the thunder clap! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You don't remember what [f] means???? OMG! This is terrible! How can you not remember the [f]! Ok so maybe I should have put (f)...does that help now? Wrong brackets yanno...sigh...duh K again..it's been too long I guess... K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Peaches, Thanks for the 'wow' not sure if this little piece deserves it but I will accept it with pleasure Kethry, thanks for your lovely reply. I would love to meet you in Melbourne I'll email or icq you Michael, so good to see you. Glad to have made you smile Thank you.Blues, Thank you so much for your lovely comment, so glad you liked. Love your Username btw. Ahhhh SB, yesss it's the brackets. I am very precise ya know. LOL. ok just a little. OK OK perhaps a teeny weeny bit. Anyway... YOU got it wrong m'dear. Oh and yes it has been TOO long. sighhhh. hugs and (f) oh and here is a (k) for old times sake  Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (02-10-2002 10:15 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
melbourne---gee , don't think i can make it-- how about melrose?-- (f)-- flower isn't it? There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie .. I wish I could meet you in Melrose, sigh.... yup (f) is a flower... but [f] isnt. Is it Kamla? Maree |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . the Dreamtime. . . it's not just a time. . . it's a place as well. . .well, at least to me it is. . . I remember reading about it when I was working on the Goddess series. . . anyway. . . (stop rambling Sven!!). . . I really like this one Maree. . . I can see the picture that it shows, the rumble, the fire. . . yes. . .very clear. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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