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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-10 11:34 PM

Cupid’s Antics

How innocent is his charming smile
gazing with a twinkle in his eyes
Is the path he leads one to beguile
or will it be true love will arise

A little imp is what some call him
just stirring up trouble with his bow
Some say he does it all on a whim
wondering when true love he’ll bestow

This time of year he flies round with joy
searching for the heart to take his aim
Arrows of passion is what he’ll employ
setting a fire from one single flame

With grins of mischief he takes a shot
knowing the result of his actions
Romance brings desires once forgot
when cupid gives you new attractions

His strike has you sending silly cards
and sweet chocolates that delight
With flowers that say more than regards
and love poems all written to invite

Cupid’s antics designed to excite
as all humans succumb to his charms
Sighs of love will fill this special night
from dreamers embraced in loving arms

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-02-10 11:41 PM

Karen - a'hhhh, Cupid that little guy with the big arrow. Sweetheart of a poem, like it a lot. Very smooth and moves in the groove...

BC

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2002-02-10 11:42 PM

Karen,

I'll bet cupid is going to hit you with the love arrow

I love the way you rhyme so perfectly!!!

Happy Valentines Day

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2002-02-10 11:46 PM

cupid is arming himself alright and you'll be getting gifts out of site

nice write

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

4 posted 2002-02-10 11:46 PM

Ah! Yes, sweet Karen. Better walk carefully the next few days.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-02-11 05:46 AM

It is a beauty Karen...Worth every minute
of effort....Yes, he does those silly
shots that make us all act very lovey
and different... Personally, I wear
a Kevlar Jacket....Can't get me...ouch...
what was that.?????

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

6 posted 2002-02-11 06:17 AM

Karen,who would have though one little Cupid could do such wonderful things?Loved it!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2002-02-11 08:49 AM

He usually misses and hits me in the butt
I bet it's on purpose too

Loved it Karen

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-02-11 08:51 AM

This is fun, just what I needed.
Sandra

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-02-11 12:28 PM

Oh how sweet sweet karen, that darling little cupid. love it.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2002-03-12 11:30 PM

Well penned! Personally I think that Cupid should wear horns rather than wings

Your poem is just too cute!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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