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Ambrosia Wine |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Ambrosia Wine Your eyes mesmerize me with their flame melting my heart from the heat I feel They capture my gaze staking your claim with the bold passion that they reveal A warmth is burning throughout my veins as you take me into your embrace Strong arms enfold me within love’s chains with your steady steps setting the pace You lead in the dance, filled with desire, while I silently whisper your name Your touch is setting my flesh on fire as my eyes shine with love to proclaim Your lips descend to gently brush mine and share love’s taste from your teasing kiss While we sip from such ambrosia wine nothing else in the real world exists Karen Torbiak 2002© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Oh Karen! This was absolutely stunning. You portray love and romance so very well. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So much is this true, I feel inspired to write a wine poem  Love it, Karen. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
There you have it ... a perfect love moment! Your work just flowed down the page and my eyes followed, unbidden! Well done, indeed! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Your lips descend to gently brush mine and share love’s taste from your teasing kiss While we sip from such ambrosia wine nothing else in the real world exists I'm not much for wine but I wouldn't mind a sip of this. You write the best romance, Karen! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully romantic, Karen....Heavy breathing and all!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"nothing else in the real world exists" oh how romantic. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...I don't think I have ever had Ambrosia wine...IS there such a thing? I do know one thing....passion and love flows from each line of this sensual dance of two lovers....Very beautifully done... Your heart pumps passionate poetry 24/7... No doubt about it... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Such a tender piece, makes me long to drink wine.... Hugs to you...Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - magnificent, just magnificent. Please, pass me a glass of Ambrosia.... BC |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
No doubt..the romance and passion flow in this..breathtaking.. VR |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...Once again, you light up the screen with the intensity and passion of your poetry. This is MAGNIFICENT!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful karen...when one is in love nothing else seems to exist..so true..hugs  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sue...thank you, so much...I have been told that I say it well because I don't have it in my life...*grin* I wonder what would happen if I did. **hugs** Sandra...and I love the poem you wrote about wine. You made my day. **hugs** Interloper...You eyes can follow my words any time you like. **hugs** Duncan...actually I am not too much of a wine person myself but the wine of the Gods just seemed to fit with the vision. **hugs** Madame Chipmunk....I am so glad you liked the passion...I so love to write passion into my poems. **hugs** floria...I am glad you think so....romance is something that is a favorite of mine. **hugs** Barry...you are too cute...go get a hug from Lou for me...**hugs** Lauren...Thank you so much for the hugs..they are much appreciated..**hugs** Bill....passing the glass with a sparkle of mischief in my eyes...**hugs** VR...I am so glad you think so...it means my poem did what I wanted it to. **hugs** Ivy...I am so glad you like it....visions of love still fill my dreams. **hugs** Victoria...You are so right...now I just need to fall in love to shut out the real world. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sensually wonderful! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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