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Silence |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
quiet isn't a bad thing you know my sweet friend and lover silence can speak more words than this tongue is capable silence writes more beautifully than my pen could ever hope. my silence whispers an entire lifetime of i love you's caught within my husky breath that will never warm your ear it restrains a thousand icy words wrapped in cushions of regret that would cause nothing but pain my silence sings a tender lullaby to a daughter we will never hold it provides a comforting haven for the tears you'll never taste falling from the golden pools that reflect in starlit pureness all that was and is forever yours. my silence contemplates a refusal to tear myself from the breaking waves (so breathtaking...so destructive) the day kissing the ocean, our backs turned. I didn't want to leave then I don't want to leave now. but you've made all the choices for us silence isn't a bad thing you know my sweet friend and lover silence will hold you as I no longer can it will drink of your soul thru topaz eyes silence can give you all that I am not able because I loved you with all my heart (each word penned in scarlet proof) and in silence I always will. -heather |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"silence will hold you as I no longer can it will drink of your soul thru topaz eyes silence can give you all that I am not able" What a wonderful first post. Welcome to the land of passionate poetry. I really like this poem, and look forward to reading more like this, filled with vivid emotional imagery. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is goreous writing....your imagery is lovely and compliments the passionate expressions of this well written piece... Welcome to Poetry Land Heather...so nice to have you here... I look forward to more of your impressive work. jm "Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Heather. This is a beautifully done piece. Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Very nice first post Heather! I shall look forward to more of your work! Make yourself at home. ~Hugs, Nancy Lee~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice first post. I will look forward to reading more from you Julie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. I think you're going to like it around here... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Oh my... this is sad but lovely. Very impressive.. not only do I think you'll like it here.. I think all of us will like you liking it.. LMAO Pepper |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Heather this is outstanding How is this for a debut?, Well done, very well done Welcome to Passions As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Thank you for the wonderful welcome all! *smiles* I was brought here by *Jenn*/Temptress...an old friend from another poetry site. Been lurking and getting a feel for the atmosphere here for a few weeks...ready to jump in now! |
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