Open Poetry #18 |
Game of Love (repost by request) |
rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Face The day In coldness chill Pitching smile kisses Across the gray green fading grass Morning misty ghosting breath Step up to the plate Hit home the spinning Rush of love Saving it all up Tossing through the windshield He’s grinning In reverse Backing out Knocking over Garbage cans Laughing Catching my love Sighing From the enamour Of a well spent night Still lingering When he leaves For the day I need him To Be that way |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you hit a homer and run in a field of eternal dreams of true love forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
mmmmmmm now these are the kind of games I can really like...Well said. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina It's so nice to see you again. As always you weave your words like magic. This was wonderful and so very much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rwood - the game of love, like the way you wrote about it. Great write.. BC |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
What a great lighthearted poem! I like how you put it in the form of a ballgame...it's a refreshing outlook on the subject of love! Love, Bonnie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Excellent write, enjoyed |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, I don't care...I'm gonna pretend this was written for me! Thank you tons for this repost. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sighing From the enamour Of a well spent night Still lingering When he leaves For the day I need him To Be that way ================================= SO DO I!!!!! *whew* hey you...where you been??? missed you around here....I need regular Reggie reads or I wont make it thru the week LOL So...keep em coming!!! You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Tossing through the windshield He’s grinning In reverse Backing out Knocking over Garbage cans Laughing And he needs to be this for you. I so related to this poem. It says 'happy to be who we are' to me but then I can be strange sometimes. Anyway you meant it, I liked it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know this reminded me of several scenes from the movie, "When A Man Loves A Woman" I hope you saw it Regina, as the love in this and acceptance of small things to be amazed at is at least my definition of true love, and you penned it so well. The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I enjoyed it just as much the second time around. Michael |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I loved it the first time and love it still. I have missed your work, lately. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Thank you all so much for such wonderful response to this little ditty. It just warms my heart to share with you all. Wish I had more time to do so as my muse is starting to kick and scream at me! Just know that each of you make me smile so large my ears touch in the back! So sorry to miss your wonderful words as well. Will catch them like fireflies one eve! Love Peace and Poetry. Love Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, where ya been?? We miss ya girl!!! Nice write to come back with…it seems to dance. I never saw it the first time, so I’m glad to see it now. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Just can't help myself Reg, gotta go for a spin! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you reposted...good write, as always |
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