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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-02-10 07:12 PM



Forever

Your life is a map inside of my head
each path you take, is a neuron
my impulses light your way
jumping the spaces between my actions
I feel your footsteps walking gently through the fissures
and your love caressing each of my thoughts

In the mirror, I glimpse your sweet image
looking back at me
from the vast empty circles surrounded by my green irises
you have become as much a part of me
as my own reflection
your being has filled my empty spaces
as mine has filled yours
we belong together
forever




copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (02-10-2002 07:14 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-02-10 07:20 PM


Lyra, another love filled post for your David's birthday.
Well done!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-10 07:22 PM


Wow! Madame, this is so beautiful. You write like you are very full of God's Wonderful Love.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-02-10 08:41 PM


Newell thanks for your reply and Nancy, thanks again...I was going to give him the talking brocoli, but I think the singing beet might be a better birthday cake substitute for a vegetarian.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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4 posted 2002-02-10 09:35 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your David is going to love this forever, this is gorgeous! HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAVID!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-10 11:20 PM


Lyra~

Lovely my friend.....


HUGSSSS


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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6 posted 2002-02-10 11:39 PM


awwwwww , Here's wishing David a happy birthday!!!
ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-02-10 11:41 PM


Lovely poem and dedication...A Happy Birthday
to David and best for both of you


Startime
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8 posted 2002-02-10 11:44 PM


Oh gosh...you better give him dozens of birthday kisses....I love this poem....A happy birthday to David...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-02-11 06:32 AM


Lyra,please give David a birthday hug for me.
TAKE CARE!

Juanita

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strbbux
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10 posted 2002-02-11 12:32 PM


Oh Lyra how wonderful and beautiful this is. you write from your soul. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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