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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-02-10 06:06 PM

Heaven abounds in your arms
Open to me whenever I am in need
Love me here forever, for
Dreams are found in your warmth

My soul does crave you
Every day, I look forward to you

Calm my fears in your embrace
Love away the insecurities, sadness
Open please & receive me
Sweet is the tenderness surrounding me
Everyday I shall seek this heaven

~Tier
1998

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-02-10 06:12 PM

I... like it! I love the way you did this one! That format isn't always that easy to do, but you did it well!

It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-02-10 06:13 PM

Thank you, Skyfire...

*smiles*

~Tier

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-02-10 06:16 PM

Tier...beautifully faithful poem...enjoyed.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-02-10 06:16 PM

Aw, this is cute, it's been awhile since i've written an acrostic, I should write some again! Love it sweetie, you are amazing!

Joanna

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-10 06:19 PM

Oh I love this! This is a beautiful acrostic!Heaven through a lovers arms!
So perfect!
Thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-10-2002 06:20 PM).]

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-02-10 06:19 PM

Thank you, Magus, I'm glad that you liked!

So nice of you to say, Joanna, you've made my day!

*smiles*

~Tier

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-10 06:40 PM

Tiers, I love acrostics and this is so so romantic, wonderfully done.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

8 posted 2002-02-10 06:46 PM

Thank you, Floria!

*smiles*

~Tier

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2002-02-11 01:19 PM

Beautiful acrostic!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2002-02-11 01:21 PM

Thank you, Interloper!

*big smiles*

~Tier

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

11 posted 2002-02-11 07:14 PM

This is truly heaven. Well done.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2002-02-11 08:06 PM

No, Thank YOU, Moonlight Romeo!

*smiles*

~Tier

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