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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2002-02-10 06:06 PM




Heaven abounds in your arms
Open to me whenever I am in need
Love me here forever, for
Dreams are found in your warmth

My soul does crave you
Every day, I look forward to you

Calm my fears in your embrace
Love away the insecurities, sadness
Open please & receive me
Sweet is the tenderness surrounding me
Everyday I shall seek this heaven


~Tier
1998

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1 posted 2002-02-10 06:12 PM


I... like it! I love the way you did this one! That format isn't always that easy to do, but you did it well!

It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots.

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-02-10 06:13 PM


Thank you, Skyfire...

*smiles*

~Tier

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3 posted 2002-02-10 06:16 PM


Tier...beautifully faithful poem...enjoyed.
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4 posted 2002-02-10 06:16 PM


Aw, this is cute, it's been awhile since i've written an acrostic, I should write some again! Love it sweetie, you are amazing!

Joanna

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5 posted 2002-02-10 06:19 PM



Oh I love this! This is a beautiful acrostic!Heaven through a lovers arms!
So perfect!
Thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you  

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-10-2002 06:20 PM).]

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2002-02-10 06:19 PM


Thank you, Magus, I'm glad that you liked!

So nice of you to say, Joanna, you've made my day!

*smiles*

~Tier

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7 posted 2002-02-10 06:40 PM


Tiers, I love acrostics and this is so so romantic, wonderfully done. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Tiersdin
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8 posted 2002-02-10 06:46 PM


Thank you, Floria!

*smiles*

~Tier

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9 posted 2002-02-11 01:19 PM


Beautiful acrostic!
I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Tiersdin
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10 posted 2002-02-11 01:21 PM


Thank you, Interloper!

*big smiles*

~Tier

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11 posted 2002-02-11 07:14 PM


This is truly heaven.  Well done.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Tiersdin
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12 posted 2002-02-11 08:06 PM


No, Thank YOU, Moonlight Romeo!

*smiles*

~Tier

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