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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-01-04 07:32 PM

A knock on the door
leaves you sweating inside
but you tempt it again
and your dream is over
Following the sound
of who maybe outside
the lightning breaks
and your dream is over
Walking through the door
that has kept you inside
you run for the figure
and your heart is over
Grasping at the arms
of material things
that leave you hanging
and your soul is over
Yet with one little step
you can dangle your fate
control your fears
and your anger is over
Walk your own path
and find your own way
soon you'll be free
and your pain is over.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

1 posted 2002-01-04 11:59 PM

Micheal, amazing write. Deep wisdom here.

Parker

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

2 posted 2002-01-05 06:59 PM

I have to agree with James here. Another gem you have written.

Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-05 07:12 PM

YAY!!! May we all follow our own paths and clear ourselves and toss our troubles away and have the notion that everything will be okay! (big hugggsssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, wisdom drips from your pen! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-05 09:35 PM

I wish....pain to be over.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

5 posted 2002-01-08 10:30 AM

Agree with you I do, as always. I think sometimes people wait for someone else or something else to take pain and sadness away......when the power is within ourselves.........
As Always
Jenn E

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-01-08 03:50 PM

Michael,
This raised some thoughts in me, thanks for the offering of pure poetry.

is it true?
we renew
in all we do
finding the lost
not counting the cost
seeing the host
to make gold of dross

if that's the case
we can erase
pain and its trace
moving along
to sing a song
soaring aloft
where angels belong

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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