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The cars in my life Themes
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The cars in my life Themes |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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"54" Ford Victoria My first car was great Top down and cruising the night First taste of freedom Volvo 122S No nonsense little car Built just like a mini tank Sort of a sports car Olds 88 God awfull junker Cheap and bought third hand Wheels for the bad times Fiat My Italian love Low,sleek and crayon red Great on the corners Pinto wagon The price of marriage Something to carry the kids Domestication! Toyota Pick ups 1&2 I love my truck Every man should own one It's just a male thing paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (02-10-2002 08:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Ooohhhhhhh...and they are built to last!!! (smiles) I always love the comparison tool you use in your poems, it's always a delight to see the transition of emotions in your wonderful words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"Every man should own a truck" Amen! Michael |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bob, another great write from you today! Love the trucks myself! Good stuff here! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love the idea of a man and a truck...but for me a Volkswagon was my primary car...not my choice but I had a load of adventures in one and they have those cute little hanging straps for...going around the curves really fast. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This is cute, but I'd love to see an extended poem that goes into more details about these cars in relation to the time in your life etc. Hope ya don't mind the small small crit. **jenn ducks** For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
It's just a male thing to love a truck? *grins* I like this one... it's different from the poems that usually float around here! It only takes ten minutes to make pidgeons stuffed with apricots. |
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