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Thoughts To Haunt |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“THOUGHTS TO HAUNT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Had love once, and lost, but then found it, and won… Does this mean I’m even, or is it just an aberration… Loves lost and won, h’mmm, that’s something… Is it saying I’m new, or a heart, torturing… How does it stop, or end, with so much wanting… Turning cold or warm, perhaps just to stay, aching… Just a few I guess, of thoughts to haunt… Touching this gentle mind, always, to taunt… ~~~~ |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
A delicate and questioning piece...very beautiful!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I think when we find love, we always ask ourselves these questions, but I know deep down as long as we accept what tomorrow brings and cherish and nurture love with a smile, we will not be haunted but enchanted with beauty! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How does it stop, or end, with so much wanting… Turning cold or warm, perhaps just to stay, aching… Your thoughts leave me pensive as I stare. Enjoyed this very much BC~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just a few I guess, of thoughts to haunt… Touching this gentle mind, always, to taunt… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Bill, very well expressed and this closing stanza sort of wraps it all up. Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
When you find the answers let me know.Definetly questions we have all asked ourselves. peaches |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, We all make the rounds. Enjoyed |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* questions within the heart that only the heart can answer...sometimes we go over these kind of thoughts so much that they can haunt us...maybe the answer just lays in embracing the love we have....**big big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Good question Bill. I think it never ends. You know, that is one thing we never know about. Love, it comes and it goes. floriaFloria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's like that balance of scales. . . it never ends. . . great job BC. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Bill, This is a beautiful, though a somewhat sad poem. Had love once, and lost, but then found it, and won… Does this mean I’m even, or is it just an aberration… Gee, I've loved many times, and still do. I have never lost. Because to lose you need to feel some kind of possession, ownership, or the like. And I only share love believing that God is the owner. My loves are always free so there is no way I can lose. But the love we share is always wonderful. It's always win, win! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-10-2002 08:11 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, these thoughts haunt me too. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ it does seem to haunt sometimes, maybe thats a good thing?? I sometimes think it is.... great write my friend... Lauren~ Step through the |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,great poem with too many questions for me to answer.  Juanita |
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