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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
My thoughts chase mirages, providing my reality with so much pain And though they are thirsty, I let them go on, hoping, eventually, they will perish © David 2002 [This message has been edited by GenXer (02-09-2002 05:05 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) So sad but well-written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope that soon joy and sunshine will fill your heart and your thoughts will become ones of promise and glee! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet freind, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dave, do they ever or do they only fade to resurface when life takes a turn for the worse. Sad and yet comforting write. (((Heart hugs))) Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very nice piece, Dave. I like the brevity that comes right to the point. Cheryl |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, because it is brief, it packs more of a punch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
GenXer, Everything fades, enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Short and straight to the point. I appreciate that! Good one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
David, I think I just got punched! Excellent. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Nice write.Everything does fade.Short but to the point. Peaches |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow really nice. "hoping, eventually, they will perish" so much said in a few words. floriaFloria |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy Oh WOW when YOU write you really write, this is utterly utterly fabulous. That’s the best thing with mirages you know that are just images that aren’t really truth. YOU darling boy are a fabulous writer, even if you do make me cry on occasion. I forgive you Come here darling boy for a quick kiss   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* made me think of how I keep thinking dreams come true...so I just keep writing and chasing them in my heart....as you say they do give hope...I guess that is why I don't give up on them. **big hugs**  Thank you....Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (02-10-2002 12:34 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
brilliantly composed and true to the point..we are all nomads wandering in the desert, thirsty for something |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know what you mean, if we don't look it might go away. But don't we always have one eye open just in case? Loved your expression GenXer~~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave, I don't think they ever perish. They just fade away and come back to haunt another day. I like this.. and I can relate. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simple..hopeful...sad.. enjoyed. For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I hope this helps, Dave...  I figured that at least you could have a really nice mirage to look at. Nice little poem! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed this... *smiles* ~Tier |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,short and to the point! I have missed you since you been gone.i`m on the wrong computer to give you a graphic ain`t you glad? Your southern friend, Juanita |
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