Open Poetry #18 |
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Two Hearts Entwined |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
The light shining in your eyes Reveals the brightest shade of blue How many times we've walked these sands Arm in arm just me and you Two lovers by the seashore Who have thrown caution to the wind Within each others hearts is where Our hopes and dreams are pinned You hold my hands so delicately As our fingers interlace Then you move your lips to mine And kiss me tenderly on the face Using an old piece of driftwood We trace a heart here in the sand As the warming Summer's breeze Makes its way across the land You whisper the words 'I love you' As we gaze on out to sea Within the safety of your loving arms Is where I'll always want to be 'tho the tide will soon erase Our footprints in the sand My love for you grows stronger As our hearts now take command The light of the day is now fading As the gulls fly towards the sun Under the light of the silvery moon Is where our two hearts will become one Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Suetang, I love this verse. "'tho the tide will soon erase Our footprints in the sand My love for you grows stronger As our hearts now take command" It just seems to say it all. floria |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
EXCELLENT POEM, SUETANG!!!! Your rhyme scheme and your wonderfully lyrical poetic language make this poem great. ***Ivy Rose |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminded me of the time when me and my girlfriend were walking on the beach late at night and we watched a large metal bouy wash onto shore...we rolled it onto the sand and wrote love letters all over it...James |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this made me feel lovesick just thinking about kissing my dream rose on the beach! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may waves of love forever whisper from your loving heart gently! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance at its finest......I love the whole feel of this wonderful poem. *sigh* shoot.....Friday night and now I am in a very romantic mood. **hugs** thank you for the wonderful read. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Love is in the air.. lovely scene you've set here.. a lyrical piece. Hugs, Pepper |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is so lovely. Brings memories of my own back to mind...a few tears as well. Hugs, Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very, very romantic. I could feel the moonlight. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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