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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-01 10:13 AM

Last night
I made a poem on my mind
words kept coming up
fighting for space
But I was too tired then
to get up and take my pen
What a torture I spend all night
trying to memorize it all
so that the words would not be gone
Now in the morning
when the sun rose
I could not remember none
And my friends
I learn a lesson
words are like problems
in the night they keep you up
but in the morning some might
be gone

[This message has been edited by walker (01-01-2002 10:16 AM).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-01 10:46 AM

this has happened to me, I know this feeling.

I am/Kathleen/

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-01 12:26 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, I know just how you feel, I too always have dreams of falling in love all the time, and I always feel sad especially when I can't remember it all! (sigh) May all your beautiful dreams be captured with beauty, sweet friend, we all love you and your dreams so very much! (kiss on cheek) HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet WAlker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-01-01 12:27 PM

I often think the best poems I write are the ones forgotten by morning. Enjoyed, walker.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2002-01-01 12:33 PM

Oh...yes...I know what you mean

I have gone through that many times

and alas....

Thank you
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2002-01-01 12:36 PM

so true...happened to me many times...helen

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-01-01 12:38 PM

"words are like problems
in the night they keep you up
but in the morning some might
be gone"

Not only have I experienced this as well, but this is such a superb analogy Walker! Very much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

7 posted 2002-01-01 01:57 PM

Ah! It happens so often! I can't get to sleep until I write them down. Or I will forget them by morning. Good. I like it!

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2002-01-01 09:28 PM

You are absolutely right Walker. If I don't write them down straight away, I never remember them. I has caused some late nights I'll tell you!! Lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2002-01-27 07:58 PM

!!!  cool!!!

i have the same problem...the nite gets quiet..i lay in bed thinking...thinking...the words come into my mind..i think, 'wow, thats cool..i hope i can remember that..........'and then comes morning...and i'm so disappointed that my coolbeans poem is disappeared!!  grrrr...

like problems...rofl...what a great link-up there..!!  always happy when the problems go away with the nite!

i really enjoyed this one..!

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-01-27 08:41 PM

This happens to me 24/7....I have to write
them down as they come to me....or they die
then and there....Like this poem...so true.

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