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ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-02-09 10:07 PM

                         From deep within her soft eyes
                             and in her sultry laugh
                          come tender hearted feelings
                         where blue-eyed moments last.
                          By graceful taste and sharing
                         through strife or peace and hope
                         there lies my sweet enchantress
                              The lady of my soul.

                          Her rare and mystic mindset
                            a lighthouse for the truth
                           finds passion over matrons
                           on constant winds of youth.
                          With words of golden wisdom
                             Inwoven in her speech
                          with glamour and true vision
                           she speaks of faith in leaps.

                         Her look is deep with dreaming
                           of a love that cancels tears.
                         Her eyes are filled with wonder
                             and unpermitted fears.
                        For she's come down from heaven
                           and all the lives she passed
                             are vehicles of purpose
                           that wait to bring her back.

                         And when her needed tableaux
                           protects her special doves
                          with teeming flair and purpose
                            she triumphs in her love.
                           In calm she waits out worry
                          when time for changing grows
                           and there's no other mortal
                           more patient with her own.

                          Deep in the heart of my soul
                           lies the jewell of her worth.
                          where destiny has brought her
                            to deal with love or hurt.
                           In bold and sudden fashion
                             she rises from the fold
                           to state her love with spirit
                              the lady of my soul.

                          She knows the dry eyes hiding
                            the feelings in this man.
                           The sweetness of her merit
                            within my pulse expands.
                           Her armor or her softness
                           both stir my mind like fire
                           no quick reluctant purpose
                            can quell my deep desire.

                           With cheer and expectation
                           and time for all things born
                          she heartens the disheartened
                            and comforts the forlorn.
                           She's gentle and all-seeing
                             and mirrors her repose
                           with love for curing sadness
                              the lady of my soul.

                         Her words are wonderous music
                          that warm like melting spring.
                         And her song is like the twilight
                            the end of day can bring.
                          Her senusous naked valleys
                          where sensation turns me on
                            are places where I take
                            the finest journey home.

                          And year by year she's gifted
                         with the will to share her source
                           Her love of future scanning
                             the path of evermore.
                         And back from all life's setbacks
                          she springs to keep me whole
                           with sorceries of gladness
                              the lady of my soul.

                                 © Eric True

[This message has been edited by ethome (02-09-2002 10:12 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-09 10:14 PM

"Her words are wonderous music
that warm like melting spring.
And her song is like the twilight
the end of day can bring.
Her senusous naked valleys
where sensation turns me on
are places where I race
the finest journey home.

And year by year she's gifted
with the will to share her source
Her love of future scanning
the path of evermore.
And back from all life's setbacks
she springs to keep me whole
with sorceries of gladness
the lady of my soul."

(tears fall down my cheeks) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this pooem is soooooo beautiful it made me cry to feel the enchantment of bliss in your heart! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may she forever spellbind you with loves magic and forever be gifted with eternitys promise! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-02-09 10:16 PM

PT darling boy this is outstanding writing, I love this poem it is utterly utterly wonderful. I can see the growth in you in this truly excellent writing you are growing soooooooo fine

This is one of your finest poems ever it shines like a jewel in an ocean of mediocrity. Not that your work is ever mediocre it isn’t and never has been but this is utterly outstandingly good.

Another for my library

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2002-02-09 10:19 PM

Thank you Noah and Marsha you're both so very kind!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-02-09 10:26 PM

THIS is one of the most beautiful pieces I have read in a long time....and I am keeping it!!
Thank you for the most enjoyable read.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-02-09 10:32 PM

                         "Her words are wonderous music
                          that warm like melting spring.
                         And her song is like the twilight
                            the end of day can bring.
                          Her senusous naked valleys
                          where sensation turns me on
                            are places where I take
                            the finest journey home."
this is so exquisite

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2002-02-09 10:32 PM

Thanks Nancy!
I'm glad you could take the time to read.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2002-02-09 10:33 PM

Sea!
You snuck in there on me....he he, thanks for reading and commenting!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2002-02-10 10:00 AM

Eric

Bravo!!

A wonderous and exceptionally done poem, my friend!!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

9 posted 2002-02-10 10:17 AM

Eric,
A wonderful, beautiful, and exquisite write.You have outdone yourself here and I absolutely love it.This is definetly a keeper.
Peaches

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2002-02-10 10:31 AM

I smiled at Nancy's reaction to this one...recalling the first time I read this, it took my breath away, and has always been high on my list of faves by you...(hard to pick, long list)

its a classic piece of ethome poetry and showcases your many gifts. Yes...exquisite is a perfect word to describe this romantic masterpiece of rhyme and harmony.
Outstanding writing E-babes...as always.

~~~~~~
and ya know I have to leave ya this...

Crazy Love

Yes I need her in the daytime
Yes I need her in the night
Yes I want to throw my arms around her
Kiss her hug her kiss her hug her tight

And when I'm returning from so far away
She gives me some sweet lovin' brighten up my day
Yes it makes me righteous, yes it makes me feel whole
Yes it makes me mellow down in to my soul

~VAN THE MAN~

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-02-10 01:48 PM

Fantastic expression of a womans worth to a man that can cleary see her beauty...James

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

12 posted 2002-02-10 07:28 PM

Ethome,

this is stunning. You continue to grow as a poet.

Cor

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

13 posted 2002-02-10 07:35 PM

I am so glad I hadn't yet turned off the computer...thank you for this lovely, Ethome...thank you very much...

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2002-02-10 07:37 PM

Eric, this is beautiful, you have outdone yourself.
Sandra

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2002-02-10 08:52 PM

Hello Eric

Your words spoke of such a timeless love and deep devotion to your lady. Your words flowed like a tranquil stream and were so much enjoyed by this reader.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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