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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-02-09 09:26 AM

Your whispers linger,
dance with me again
here and now

Reflected in candle light
seduction entwines with the
silk touch of your fingers
drinking in soft lavender
skin

Enter my dreams,

Glissade your arms around
my waist, let me hold
close all your layers,
drawing together the edges
of fingers sliding together with mine ,
feeling your hand
across my back connecting
sensual skin to the deeper touch
of gentle passion

Man of soft ecstasy

Pleasure is midnight love
under moonlight as the misty
haze streams in
curtains of gold satin
from cloud tops

Xanadu

is love dancing
in your arms

Dance me again

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart
Repost from open 9

© 2/9/2002

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-09-2002 11:45 AM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-02-09 09:28 AM

Lauren, your lines are fantastic, love these.

"Glissade your arms around
my waist, let me hold
close all your layers,'

very nice, soft, romantic,

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-02-09 09:31 AM

Greeneyes,
WOW and I don't say that too often. Lovely write.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-02-09 09:53 AM

Oh i love this..very sensual indeed Lauren..mmmm

~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-09 10:27 AM

"Xanadu

is love dancing
in your arms

Dance me again"

this is intoxicating and beautiful

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-02-09 11:43 AM

Lauren...this is passionately beautiful..what
an image..

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-09 11:51 AM

Pleasure is midnight love
under moonlight as the misty
haze streams in
curtains of gold satin
from cloud tops

Xanadu

is love dancing
in your arms

Dance me again
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lauren~Beautiful as always.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-02-09 01:15 PM

Smooth as silk...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-09 02:18 PM

"Xanadu

is love dancing
in your arms

Dance me again"

Awwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the imagery and romance you put into your words, this is gorgeous! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you forever dance with your love in eternity! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-09 06:53 PM

Floria~

Thank you my friend, for responding and for picking one of my favorite lines.....HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-02-09 06:59 PM

Seymour Tabin~

Thanks for the WOW I love that....

~~
Victoria~

Thanks for stopping by, enjoyed your words much....HUGS

~~
SEA~

'Drink' all ya want, so glad you enjoyed....thanks...

Barry~

Thanks my friend....I appreciate that...

~~

Nancy~

You picked one of my favorite lines as well....thank you for responding so kindly....HUGS

~~

JamesMichael~

Thank you for stopping by, for a little silk..*s*

~~

Sweet Noah~

Dance your feet off....

thank you my friend....appreciate you....

all.....

's

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2002-02-09 07:13 PM

Lauren,
Gotta run...I'll be back to comment.
*bump*

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-02-09 11:10 PM

Greeneyes - and to think I almost missed this one. This is one great romantic write, excellent...

BC

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

13 posted 2002-02-10 12:31 PM

Lauren,
Oh my...this is melting me from the inside out. I can't explain how this poem touches me...

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2002-02-10 01:01 AM

Glissade your arms around
my waist, let me hold
close all your layers,
drawing together the edges
of fingers sliding together with mine ,
feeling your hand
across my back connecting
sensual skin to the deeper touch
of gentle passion

Man of soft ecstasy

Pleasure is midnight love
under moonlight as the misty
haze streams in
curtains of gold satin
from cloud tops
====================================

your poetry is my Xanadu ...
a beautiful place I can escape too...
and this gem...there aint a line that I didnt feel. Sensually stunning.

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

15 posted 2002-02-10 03:44 AM

Lauren,

This is truly lovely. To borrow a phrase from some of my friends, "This Rocks!"

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2002-02-10 06:11 PM

I remember this! Just as nice the second [third, fourth, fifth...get the hint?] time around!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

17 posted 2002-02-10 07:45 PM

. . . in Xanadu did Kubla Kahn a stately pleasure dome create. . .

and I know that this is what it was like. . . wonderfully done Lauren. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2002-02-11 12:02 PM

Bill~

So glad you didnt, thanks for enjoying....

~~

Larry~

It is indeed a lovely place to melt, thanks for your touching reply....

~~
Janet Marie~

Its always good to go back and dance there, thank you for your sweet reply...

~~

Michael~

THANKS!!!

~~

Sunshine~

thanks for reading again....much appreciated...

~~

Sven~

YES...thanks for stopping by....good to see your words here....

~~
Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2002-02-11 01:30 PM

glissade in foxtrot
also looks good in a waltz
moving together

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

20 posted 2002-02-11 01:59 PM

as usual, your writing leaves a sense of gentleness behind, even as it trails images across one's thoughts. beautifully done.
(what a surprise)
-Dave

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

21 posted 2002-02-11 02:06 PM

soft silken romance, I love it. Enjoyed the read

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