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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-02-09 02:26 AM

Where the ocean churns
on a leeward wind
and water swirls
blowing out to sea.

Where white caps roll
breezy in the sun
and palm trees sway
across a blue lagoon.

Where dreams aren't fought
and loves not bought
where there's nothing more
no matter what you thought.

In the darkest night
on a lost lagoon
stardust sprinkles
'round a halo moon.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-09 03:04 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) The magic of the lagoon and stardust fills your words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is breathtakingly wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-02-09 10:14 AM

this makes me want to hop a plane for Hawaii..ha..or anywhere where there is palms and an ocean..i like this alot Ms.Serenade..

:sun:

~Victoria~

"Silence is a friend who
will never betray."
— Confucius

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-02-09 10:18 AM

BluesSerenade,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-02-09 10:32 AM

I love this

the ebb and flow is perfect

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

5 posted 2002-02-09 12:11 PM

This was breathtakingly beautiful BluesSerenade in it's imagery and thought...I thoroughly enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this one! Well done.

I am glad to be around some too, miss posting.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-02-09 02:11 PM

Thanks everyone, I really should use some self control
and refrain from posting late at night.
I think it was a little too much fluff in paradise,
what can I say, I'm my worst critic.
I thank you all for reading.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-09-2002 02:12 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2002-02-09 07:15 PM

Lori,
Gotta run...I'll be back for a reply.
*bump*

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2002-02-09 10:36 PM

o yuh where is Brooke Shields when you need her ooooooooooo yuh!! nice write bloosy

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-02-09 10:53 PM

BluesSerenade - nice soft romantic read, liked it...

BC

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2002-02-10 12:27 PM

Lori,
Powder me with stardust,
To glimmer in moons glow.
While we linger at the lagoon,
And we'll sample love real slow.

Love your write...romantic!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2002-02-10 12:48 PM

Walt~
It's not Bloosy boy, wait, don't even start.
Oh yuh, uh huh~

BC~  I am a hopeless romantic for sure.
I lived in Hawaii for some time, so it
is easy to conjure up those images.
I still think I should have taken a
little more time though.  Thanks~

Larry C~  Thanks for the bump up and for
your poetic reply.  Don't worry I have
no intention of taking you up on it!

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