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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
the deep azure penetrating in deep sea intensity flowing like telegraph wires between us the coupled brimming wetness burning trails down cheeks with silent memories from ignited pasts Hypnotized, this moment is locked mesmerized, my future is assured Captivated, my soul is arrested by your gaze In placid night sight, I see you still tempting me into your desire with just a glance a search of spirit taunts me with just a bat of lashes irresistibly I am drawn to you and cannot resist the allure of Your Eyes |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE this.....  excellent!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Intense~ and lots of energy! Very nice~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile, may you forever find true love and joy just looking into loves eyes! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
beautiful! ray |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A very peaceful and magnetic poem...that draws me into the words... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful write...... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Absolutely stunning!! Good work!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Exquisite.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I LOVE THIS POEM!! it is going right into my private library for further enjoyment There is nothing like your lover's eyes...so beautiful! |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Sea- apologizing for your using your name to describe depth but if you thought it was excellent, deep sea it will be! BluesSerenade – eyes often are intense and reflect lots of energy. You are very kind, BS. Thank you!! Noah – just by seeing your picture, I can see that you have the kind of eyes that have kind eyes. **smile** You are always amazingly generous and sweet. Thank you! Ray – yes, those eyes are quite beautiful. But, you meant the poem. . . |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
Magnus - your poetry has been so inspired and wonderful lately. Thank you for taking time here with this one! Zinsser – you dispense kindness with your replies that is wore by the receipients like a cherished smile. Thank you! Vandana – all the way from India to respond!! Wow! this is a great honor to say thank you! What a lovely name you have. Amusemi – Hi! How are you this fine day? Always a pleasure to have you stop by, and stun you. ~smiling~ Thank you so much! Enchantress – exquisite is a perfect word to describe all the facits of those wonderous eyes, too. Thank you, E. Rose Petal – a lover’s eyes or touch are the easiest inspirations of all to prod the writer’s pen. I am humbled that you are placing this simple poem in your library, but you give me a huge smile that will last all the day. Thank you sweet, Rose. to all, and many many thank you's,PB4S |
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