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Open Poetry #18

Wished On Every Star

poeticdreamer
Junior Member

since 2002-01-17

Posts 46

0 posted 2002-02-09 12:11 PM

Wished on every star
Love searching in darkness
Stumbling alone and lost
Except for sparkling hopes

In fear of dawn
Harsh light dream killer
Nothing left to embrace
Only blue empty skies

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-02-09 12:16 PM

great writing on sad lonely feelings

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-09 12:22 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I know that soon true love will come to you and its beauty will surpass all the stars combined! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

quietwaters
Junior Member

since 2002-02-04

Posts 30
delray beach, florida

3 posted 2002-02-09 01:55 AM

odd how i used to think i seemed so alone
on an empty ocean...on a boat of hope...
odder still how i feel less alone...simply
because i read this piece...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-02-09 09:37 AM

Very sensitive piece here Robert. Love it.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2002-02-09 10:53 AM

enjoy every word of it

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-09 01:57 PM

Never stop wishing...you never know what the future can hold...very heartfelt writing that touched me...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2002-02-09 01:58 PM

Aching sentiment...enjoyed the write.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

8 posted 2002-02-09 05:09 PM

You definitely got my attention when you made a clear blue sky seem sad. Nice writing.

Dave

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